Reviews of Targaryen Who Turned Dragon (Against The Gods X Game Of Thrones)

lol completely lost whats happening... and why has his character done a flip ? He was a KING a DRAGON what happened to his pride, building tents for everyone, making food.... ? and then you go on and make him talk like a cultivator even changing his name ???? ruined from here sry. Also you have done a sht integration, the trials etc where okay but lets talk about the bandits.. why did he let himself be captured ? why didnt he beat them up and force them ???????? and then when you got to the sect it all went to sht basically not only did you change the rankings making it overly complicated you explained nothing.... it seems when he got to agt world its a different author and the first doing well and the second ruining it completely.. not worth the read tbh, Id say only read the game of thrones part as its decent there.

The story has a lot of potential but the mc is basically a stupid scum. He's naive. Always falling for traps and basically a child in a man's body. He's like the stereotypical rich brat antagonist you see in novels, the only difference is that he has plot armor. He doesn't even have loyalty. Even though his sect treated them with utmost respect to the point that the sect master is teaching him personally, he casually says yes to go to a stronger sect and leave behind the people who took care of him. It's basically a story about a rich brat young master who gets everything he wants with little effort because the author said so.

I quite liked the game of thrones version .. Then he got sharingan.. Then he dies in a freak accident and kis the whole momentum of the story. I honestly tried to read the rest but it felt like trying to wade through rapidly drying concrete.....

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One of the best fics in this site you did ATG better than the author even though your mc is from a diffrent universe lol hope you can finish this and keep it up thanks for your hard work

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An amazing book with good characters and good background and good character development the only problem is that I would personally like more updates during the week.

A good story ruined by the aurthor changing his mc into a childish cultivator I had hope but it was ruined. Alas it is so hard to find a story that keeps true to itself. But never the less ruined by a aurthor who is naive and a annoying mc.

the best story ive read so far.. keep it up and soon you will become a true spectacular artist ..... thats all ... ssdffghhjjjhcc hffhfgf hggh hgghfj hhghfh hhjcjghgd hgjchfhhhfhg yfgfhfydjrfh hggufhydhyf

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Great story with a charismatic MC that take decisione with, finally, his head (not AN idiot with more luck than anyting) . A beutiful world constuction and logical progression. Even if there are decison that not all wuold like (i liked them by the way) immediatily, the constuction of, personality, not only of the MC but of all other, and story, is well planned and intelligente. Pratically one of a kind, 90% of the story es in the site are nothing more than sex and big di k that go araund killing peapole like nothing. In Conclusion, thanks Man for this marvelus vison. :)

This story is great you never know where it's going not like with a lot of other stories you really put your mark on it and I hope you keep giving us more of it and finish it someday

Had me scared that this was deleted, like legit just saw the cover in my library and was like wtf was thisss????? Anyway this fanfic is pretty godamn great amd you should definitely give this a tryyyyyyyyyyyyyy

Speeds past everything and the writing/dialogue is very broken.

I don't understand how some ATG fanfics that's not as well-written as this gets millions of views. This fanfic is given so much thought and effort. Though it may not be the best for everyone, it is objectively one of the best quality ATG fanfics out there.

Great Idea and qlso reqlly splendidly done for your 1st fic...grammar is soso and some parts are unlogical, but i still enjoyed it and it was just smth new for the ATG-fic-area...not just an YunChe imitated OC, who goes on a hunting tour to get all the known goodies from the canon...

Great story. It is EXTREMELY well-written. His writing style is my favorite among other fanfics. Gave us some background about the story and made it very interesting in his own right. Great job!

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The Game of thrones cast barely reacted to the concept of cultivation. You hardly showed any elements of game of thrones that made it game of thrones without it going 'Hey thats a gam of thrones character'. Like many cultivation novels, the speed is stupid, this isn't just this novel but with everyone. Cultivation takes time, you can't just fight a few guys and become invincible as in 3-5 years. Even Yun Che was in his late twenties early thirties when he became a profound sovereign. Obviously this was a Targaryen wank and this is a personal taste but I'm sick of them. Try having a traditional cultivator interacting with them for once.

Finally, I can say that it is complete after over a year of writing. Chapters: 192 Words: 363k Average: 1.89k / chapter Although TWTD wasn't very popular and I felt like dropping it a few times, I managed to pull through. Couldn't leave Aerion hanging like that, after all. The second volume was a bit shaky, I certainly could've done much better (should have stopped at like chapter 10 and rewritten everything but that would take an extremely long time). I'll probably be doing ATG again and I already have a few ideas on how to approach that. Anyways, I hope that whoever reads this fanfic is willing to read past those shaky periods as I did place quite a number of hours into this project (like 800 hours or so... it takes me a while to get into the zone). If you don't wish to, then I can't force you... obviously. (Cough, the shameless author giving himself 5 stars >_>)