lol completely lost whats happening... and why has his character done a flip ? He was a KING a DRAGON what happened to his pride, building tents for everyone, making food.... ? and then you go on and make him talk like a cultivator even changing his name ???? ruined from here sry. Also you have done a sht integration, the trials etc where okay but lets talk about the bandits.. why did he let himself be captured ? why didnt he beat them up and force them ???????? and then when you got to the sect it all went to sht basically not only did you change the rankings making it overly complicated you explained nothing.... it seems when he got to agt world its a different author and the first doing well and the second ruining it completely.. not worth the read tbh, Id say only read the game of thrones part as its decent there.
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