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Biiiiig, Baddddd Beetle Borgs! On acid! I mean metallic! I totally wouldn't use an Isekai with wishes scenario to screw over everyone who has ever had a negative thought about me for infinity. ;D
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SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST16hCommentedI'm going to pretend this chapter never existed.
As a fucking mess, a step away from a breakdown, I asked out loud, "SOMEBODY, PLEASE TELL ME. WHAT THE FUCK HAPPENDED?"'- SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST16hReplied to DiabloRedfox
correct. Tough gramatically, its not an affinity if you have an affinity for everything. The word is by its nature discriminatory and used to single something out. Having an affinity for all elements is no different from not having an affinity for any.
'The best option is to learn Wood Release, even if it is Yamato's version.' - SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST16hPosted
The concept is alright but the writing quality, story dev and character design leave a bit to be desired... The MC Is Lunarya Stark. Latin name, which feels out of setting. MC has duo toned hair, and is the younger twin to Lyanna Stark. MC has the mindset of a teenage girl with all the drama that entails as a when shes not yet in her teens unless the author changed the ages. The story itself is told with new facts being habhazardly inserted. One moment mc is doing one thing, the next apparently she was doing another thing and the initial thing turns out to be a by product. The who, what, when and where are not very clear in this story. The formating could also do with a touch up. spme paragraphs are unpleasantly long when reading this on a smartphone. Pov's are camouflaged as random scene breaks. Example: XXXXXXXRIKARDXXXXXXX Thats illegible as all hell. I didnt even notice that was a POV indicator at first. All in all tough, its minor things that can be easily edited should the author wish to enhance the reading experience. It would be fairly simple to provide a good reading experience if the author simply mimicked the formatting of the most popular WN to the authors liking on here. Genre wise? I would peg this as a solid Gen Z mindset Teengirl Drama.
- SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST16hCommented
great so now shes what a psycho hormonally imbalanced way older than her physical years preschooler with the mindset of a teenage girl?
"When Mother was pregnant with Benjen, I nearly erased him. Do you understand? He could have been unalived! Never! Born! You know how? I got sick wandering the Godswood, looking into the future to plan somethings. I only barely managed to fool Mother into thinking i was just tired and going back to her room that night. Even then, she was delayed by nearly a full hour. If she had insisted on watching over me that night, Benjen wouldn't be here!" I give a pointed look at my parents, feeling the shock accompany their realization that I meant that Benjen was almost never conceived by my indirect choices. And a bit of embarrassed that I was commenting on their sex life, albeit vaguely. "I cannot always disclose things because that becomes another person's actions I have to account for. DO YOU KNOW HOW DIFFICULT THAT IS? HOW MUCH PRESSURE I'M UNDER? I CANT EVEN TAKE A WALK WITHOUT HAVING TO CALCULATE HOW MANY PEOPLE COULD DIE! I-" I choke off abruptly at the feeling of two hands pressing down on my shoulders; Ned. I blink away the daze around me to the realization that the room is dead silent and that I've been pulled away from the table. Ned is standing in front of me, blocking everything else from view, squeezing my shoulders tightly, but not harshly. - SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST16hCommented
if they are, hes likely poisoning them
"I got a magic boost, so I don't really need to anymore. We need to go check on the others, though. Ned, Lya, and Ben were sleeping together in Benny's room next to Mother." I tilt my head, stretching out my senses. "Maester, are my dragons in your quarters?" - SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST16hCommented
i thought she was going after the disk not dragon eggs
Father, when he pulled me from the water, caused me to slice my hand on the dagger, unknowingly helping me with the last step to awaken the dragons, something that would facilitate bringing back magic to this world. By nature, dragons were immensely powerful creatures of magic, and their mere existence will cause magic to appear around them. However, at the same time that my blood awoke them by spilling on the egg, it also smeared onto the wooden object, royally fucking me over. "Lunarya!" - SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST16hCommented
what eggs?
I had seen it when I went to cut free the eggs in the black pool of water, had felt its vileness, felt the way it had tugged on my magic. The feeling was so utterly disturbing that I nearly drowned myself cutting it loose from the vines and roots that had long since grown around it. I hadn't realized what it was, not really. I just knew that I wanted to make it ashes. - SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST23hCommented
oh sorta like the movie world war z
"The infected use their sense of smell to find the uninfected and distinguish other bearers from the uninfected, and small amounts of products like perfume or soap will attract the infected to the source of their targets. I speculate that infection occurs like other diseases, and I'm almost certain this virus enhances hearing and smell senses." - SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST23hCommented
theyre gangsters that believe theyre going after a regular guy who hasnt noticed them. theyre gonna be in the elevator together since they saw where it goes, and they got one guy down stairs on the look out. just because their target is a regular guy and they aint professionals killers.
"If they're smart, some should be going up by the elevator and one by the stairs; if they do it this way, there won't be any problems when I find them." Dominic then covered his face with a black mask and took off his jacket. The hidden muscles showed on his arms, and after that, he wrapped his left hand with the same jacket he took off. - SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST1dCommented
Covid taught us that if its mentioned in the simpsons, you roughly have a year to prepare before it 'escapes' from a lab ;p Its sad that the simpsons air more truth and news than CNN.
"In recent news, the World Health Organization issued a public apology due to an unofficial statement that was announced on its largest social network, clarifying that there is no new virus, and the one they called Z-ViraX is just an error! - SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST1dReplied to mitchell_olson
ah... tbh I am suprised they dont wear stab vests or bomb unit suits these days. At the very least panic buttons.... them kids are absolutely nuts these days
Without access to firearms and ammunition, Zane did not feel comfortable wandering off on his own. But he was currently on a high school campus, which was a gun free zone. - SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST1dCommented
No its not. Its just the best option if you dont have seed money from your parents or some partime job you worked. Its instant housing, paid education, free healthcare, min. expendature and after you get deployed, veteran benefits and discounts for life, that already start when you are in active service with your DoD card.
The military is the only opportunity to aspire to something better outside of studies within the United States; it just changes his path a bit. - SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST1dReplied to SrCuervo
they didnt no, tough likely its from outer space, its the only way most of the world could be affected overnight. everyone at the start of the show is affected, they just did not turn because they did not succumb yet. that said. i like the animal angle. I think I saw it in a british movie called... rage? or something like it, it was called the rage virus from what I remembered. it got released by animal activists breaking and entering, then letting test subject monkeys out of their cages. the only problem with this angle is that animals are unaffected in the walking dead by the wildfire virus. so if you go this angle.... your outbreak would likely go the way of ZOO mixed with that british movie with the rage virus. that means man eating crow swarms, man eating fish, man eating mice etc.
"Zz... sir, they weren't just bears. I shot at wolves, and Randall was bitten by a creature similar to a squirrel. I mean, I don't know the name of that rat or squirrel. But the animals in this forest are going crazy trying to kill us; maybe the medicine company we're heading to knows something about it." - SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST1dCommented
somehow this makes me think of shrooms
At night, in an uninhabited forest in France, to be more specific, in the Compiègne Forest. - SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST3dReplied to KK9494
the Ku Klux Clan is that group from america that dresses up as ghosts. Don't worry about it, It was just a joke.
-----KK Pizzaria, beside Konoha Hotsprings--------- - SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST4dCommented
The Ku Klux Pizzaria ?
-----KK Pizzaria, beside Konoha Hotsprings--------- - SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST4dCommented
if he has water and lightning. why would he have wood release?
'The best option is to learn Wood Release, even if it is Yamato's version.' - SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST5dCommented
he may have been the first in the world, but the concept is a wuxia favourite. the chinese and wuxia fans are likely to be right behind you and wuxia fans are everywhere.
Since he was the only one who really knew about blood crystals. He would spend his nights going out into the school campus and slaying the Walkers. Collecting whatever blood crystals he could and consuming them for their experience. - SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST5dCommented
only one security guard on the entirety kf the campus? why did he have a radio then?
Without access to firearms and ammunition, Zane did not feel comfortable wandering off on his own. But he was currently on a high school campus, which was a gun free zone. - SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST5dCommented
ones that are getting infinitely more stronger because you are remaining in the school instead of grinding like a man posessed
If it was not hostile to him, then why did it seem to be following him? Until the Stalker was killed, Zane did not feel comfortable leaving the school grounds, because he had no idea what other forms of monstrosities existed out in the city.