Review Detail of eccentricbeing in Targaryen Who Turned Dragon (Against The Gods X Game Of Thrones)
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The story has a lot of potential but the mc is basically a stupid scum. He's naive. Always falling for traps and basically a child in a man's body. He's like the stereotypical rich brat antagonist you see in novels, the only difference is that he has plot armor. He doesn't even have loyalty. Even though his sect treated them with utmost respect to the point that the sect master is teaching him personally, he casually says yes to go to a stronger sect and leave behind the people who took care of him. It's basically a story about a rich brat young master who gets everything he wants with little effort because the author said so.
Targaryen Who Turned Dragon (Against The Gods X Game Of Thrones)
SovereignOfHeaven
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Despite what I say, ur **** aint garbage BUT i am just suggesting,, here me out, ur story is actual dope and has a quite a lot of potential, BUT MC personality dosnt suit him [ king ] and he acts like a retard...I just read bout 17 chps and the MC personality made me stop, Also the cliche FF style relationships were bad. And looking at the reviews [ignoring the retarded bash], many of em actually make sense...so I am asking, mainly cause I think ur **** is dope, ...RE-Write.....like use the reviews as a base to fix ur mistakes and then add some new ****...ur **** would probably be dope...so yah...if u can rewrite, cause as it is..IDK, its makes u quit from the first few chps... SO yah..if ya rewrite, do tell....eitherway GL
SovereignOfHeaven:Uhh, he never left the Noble Rogue Sect?
amaturewriter:Despite what I say, ur **** aint garbage BUT i am just suggesting,, here me out, ur story is actual dope and has a quite a lot of potential, BUT MC personality dosnt suit him [ king ] and he acts like a retard...I just read bout 17 chps and the MC personality made me stop, Also the cliche FF style relationships were bad. And looking at the reviews [ignoring the retarded bash], many of em actually make sense...so I am asking, mainly cause I think ur **** is dope, ...RE-Write.....like use the reviews as a base to fix ur mistakes and then add some new ****...ur **** would probably be dope...so yah...if u can rewrite, cause as it is..IDK, its makes u quit from the first few chps... SO yah..if ya rewrite, do tell....eitherway GL
algo no me cuadra por que todos en el torneo tienen fuerza de esiritu de 6789 si en atg solo fueron pocos con esa fuerza
SovereignOfHeaven:Uhh, he never left the Noble Rogue Sect?