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Never heard of these domains/abilities of Hades. Are these actual domains or something you add? And if so where did you read about them?
Dagger?
Is this from a game?
Is this supposed to be the legionaries?
There is a thing as too much description.
I should have predicted you would have come ☝️🤓
No one talks like this. Especially not kids? TF 🤨
Why does uncle Ben always have to die 😢
That’s the third Valyrian sword he just gave away. Swords so expensive they could be traded for armies. And your MC is using two normal steel katanas, that aren’t going to do anything against real armor. Rest of the story has been really good so this part really annoys me. Stop being a weeb and use the strongest sword type there is. Harry is from magical Britain why he wants to use a katana any way I have no clue. He’s used the Gryfindor sword before, he should be familiar with long swords.
Do you know English?
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