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Reviews of Stranded from the past. Is this heaven’s wish for us?

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Stranded from the past. Is this heaven’s wish for us?

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Uae
UaeLv2Uae

I felt the longing and the message of the novel was delivered smoothly to me. Every word hits different and it's so deep. It moves my heart in agony. For the technicalities, separate some paragraphs and don't miss the punctuations. Great start author!

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_midnightsunshine_Lv10_midnightsunshine_

It's a serene, beautiful yet captivating story about love...the author makes the boys' struggle against fate across different lifetimes feel real even though it is a very out-worldly concept... Great and relatable characters...beautifully sculpted. The first few chapters are a little confusing on what is going on, probably because of the long paragraphs. Story's a hidden gem...waiting to be read.

YouthGod
YouthGodLv4YouthGod

Ok, so I will be truthful here. I just finish reading the first chapter, the grammar is great though I was confuse on what is happening on quite a few lines because it contains a lot of words and sadly I can't follow. But, oh well It looks good anyway. it's just the first chapter still quite a lot to check out. Imma continue reading

the_fallen
the_fallenLv4the_fallen

wow, a very interesting storyline. i think this is the first of it's kind that i have read. very detailed in its description. captivating back stories. this invokes emotions in the readers. i hope to see more updates. keep it up

WhisperP3N
WhisperP3NLv2WhisperP3N

I'm greatly enjoying what the first opening chapters have brought. The investment for the characters haven't peeked yet for me, as is, I do look forward on that changing. Same for world build. Overall, this has been a neat look and I can't wait to come back for more.

TaintedMetal
TaintedMetalLv2TaintedMetal

A comfortable read this is, as the story makes great use of language in order to invoke imagery and emotion to the reader. I personally enjoyed reading as it gave me the time and opportunity to see how the story develops overtime.

TheSuccessor
TheSuccessorLv2TheSuccessor

Very nice story indeed, I had the urge to read the 10 chapters. I would say probably be more descriptive on the writing so I can feel the feelings of the peoople

Light_ray
Light_rayLv13Light_ray

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StoryfortheAges
StoryfortheAgesLv2StoryfortheAges

Interesting characters with equally intriguing backstories. Would love to learn more about them as time passes by! Beautifully written to convey emotions, and I see a lot of potential in this work!

heavicedcoffee
heavicedcoffeeLv3heavicedcoffee

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Ysabel_xox
Ysabel_xoxLv4Ysabel_xox

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DestinyBassey_1320
DestinyBassey_1320Lv2DestinyBassey_1320

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ky_rine
ky_rineLv10ky_rine

Deatiled description... check! A spiral of emotions... check! myriad of events... check! lovable and relatable characters... check! This work is really great! Kudos to the author!

Parisian_Moon
Parisian_MoonLv10Parisian_Moon

Hello north, I would have preferred you separate paragraphs more because it appears kinda bulky when you read it in the app. The story hits right through my kokoro as always and sometimes I am intrigued about your views about love and life. I would have liked to talk more with you in discord but I am under MGS currently. The way you write is full of longing and nostalgia and it made me wanna find my soulmate. Wherever he is in this life, I hope God destroys all his fake relationships so that he could meet me faster. 😭😭

The_Procrastinator
The_ProcrastinatorLv4The_Procrastinator

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MikruZero
MikruZeroLv4MikruZero

A good read actually. But the descriptive department seems to be lacking. What I mean is that you really express yourselves and. I do feel the emotions of the characters. But the world background is what you need to describe the best. Anyways, continue working hard. Grammatical errors are also seen however just a bot of proofreading and you're done! Also, try increasing your vocab! Goodluck

SleepyKola
SleepyKolaLv12SleepyKola

This is really nice to read, even though I'm halfway through it. The writing style is easy to understand, love it! keep up the good work, author!

Nicole_99
Nicole_99Lv12Nicole_99

An interesting tale of how destiny and fate binds the MC in a never ending and sad. There were times where it was hard to grasp what the author was trying to depict due to lengthy sentences. However, the story has a good flow and an interesting storyline. I'm looking forward to more. Keep up the good work.

THE_WORDSMITH
THE_WORDSMITHLv2THE_WORDSMITH

It is an interesting story, but personally I would like to see more descriptive writing about the image of the character. How can I imagine what the character Is like and the setting too needs to be detailed. Other than that this story is nice and really look forward to reading more of it.

miwaknight
miwaknightLv2miwaknight

This was a really interesting read. I love the character designs the setting of the story. I dreaded every time I finished a chapter because I knew I only had a few more left but I couldn't stop at all. I absolutely loved it and will definitely be looking forward to the future updates! Good luck.