The story is interesting. Except for some minor grammar and punctuation errors, we can fix that :) Nonetheless, I think the author is doing a great job! Keep on writing... you're almost there :)

I don't know if I'm an Avengers fan? But definitely, I loved Tony Stark! Good job, Author! Keep it up! This story has so much potential, and you got it!

Wow, tho I'm not used to bl series/stories, but I liked how dark this story is. I mean, the author could tweak the whole story and make it about the mysterious death of a fellow student or something like that. Also, I loved that it's in a Korean setting. Overall, this book has so much potential.

Thank youuuuu~~~ <3 <3 :''>

Actually, it's EXO Suho lmao anyway, thanks for this comment! :)

No problem :)

Aside from some grammar errors, the plot and the story were interesting. Although I suggest you make their names short, most especially for the main character, so you won't confuse your readers. Aside from that, I really think you can do this! I believed in you. Keep on writing, dear :)

Wonderful! Interesting story! The plot smoothly moved throughout the whole chapter, and it makes the story beautiful. I think the author worked hard for this! Must read <3 [img=recommend]

I love how the author had written this story. It feels like she spend too much time reading greek mythologies and horror stories. I love how this story drags me into other world... and I love this darkness that surrounds your story! Overall this is an interesting, fun and exciting story! Must read! [img=update][img=recommend]

Thanks!

The work seems to be fine with me, but the story itself... I don't know maybe I was just naive but I really think you have a great future ahead of you. Keep on writing!

The story is good. It was beautifully written and the author's intentions are very clear. But it makes me wanna sleep because I felt like reading bedtime stories. Overall, I can feel the author really loves her work. Keep on writing!

Thank you! I appreciate this feedback so much :)

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Hello! It's me. Please rate Apples&Peaches according to your conscience. And don't forget to leave a comment because it is important for me to know if you love this new story. I'll update occassionally. Also, if it is not too much, add this to your library. So you will know whenever I post an update. Thank you!

I may not be able to post tonight so I'll just do a top speed update tomorrow. Thank you! ❤

Thank you for the love :)

The story is good. It's full of details and descriptions. But somehow I feel bad for Grace... cause yeah. Her life sucks. I hope she will have a nice ending. Continue writing author!