Reviews of Stacking My Abilities
Stacking My Abilities
SmallFries
- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
EXPEXPEXPEXPpp... Oh. Hey. It's Fries here. As the author, I am required by the law (of shamelessness) to leave a self-review. 4.6 / 5. Won't be perfect. But it will be completed. So yeah. Don't take this story too seriously. As the writer, I only have 2 goals: 1. Finish this book (5 volumes, 350 - 450 chapters total) 2. Enjoy the writing process. Have fun! Hope you like this story as well! Have a good time!
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Read up to chapter 16. The story is allright, nothing really stands out to me compared to similar stories. Would be a decent read for me to pass some time if it wasn't for the censoring of swear words. The near constant "*Bleep*" "*Bloop*" is jarring to read and immersion breaking. Have swearing in your story or don't, I don't care either way. If you choose to do so however, then just go all the way without the ridiculous censoring.
This novel does not deliver what it promises. I was really excited at the prospect of multiple world line transmigration. But instead we got the regular old system that gives rewards for every unique monster killed. What was the point of meeting mage mc when all he get’s from him is 2 moves that in less then 10 chapters become mediocre. I was expecting his powers to develop through interacting with his other selves but now it’s just another system novel. I reas 75 chapters in total and there was no change to this so Im dropping it here.
So... like, the story basically fails it's starting premise. Ht idea of drawing upon different selves is a cool one, but that basically only happens once, with a single other self. After that, all his abilities come from doing the megaman, and they just feel... flavorless. Like, It could be spells, or chi, or psychic powers, or whatever... it wouldn't make a difference, because the powers don't feel like anything. They don't have any character. He could have a generic system, and it wouldn't make a bit of difference. World build is... something? The world doesn't actually make a lot of sense, it basically exists enough to make the main character look cool. The mist monsters occasionally talk about being chosen to replace man, but that element hasn't gone anywhere and has no payout. In the end, there was the beginning of an interesting idea here, but nothing was done with it, and it's left the story now really feeling like anything in particular.
Writing quality: good grammar. Easy to read. Story development: A lot of action so far. Fast paced. Unlike the other stories, this story has an episodic feel to it Character design: lacks some depth to characters so far. It's like stock characters almost. Updating Stability: daily update of 1 chapter World background: can't tell so far
Writting grammar is good. Easy to read Story starts out with presenting a plot for a fight for survival story with lots of power leveling arcs, and is instead a "im stronk tkme for slice of life" story. So do note its not what is advertised, it is pretty good though as slice of life in a not really poat apocalypse. The characters have honeatly gained access to amenities and other rhings far too easily. The big time skips honestly dont do the story any favors. Plenty of content to be had during those time points. Its honestly a shame the author didnt take the time to craft it out. Characters are noraml. Nothing really aticks out positively or negatively. World background is a slightly different take on an apocalypse wifh magic and monsters but doesnt really delve into it at all. Overall Id rate it a 6/10. Very average. Really needs a more thorough story board. As well, it also needs more fleshed out content. Time skips are not replacements to good plot.
