Ehhh, you do realize you are reading on the site/app where novels and fics come to have incest with each other to leave fucked up baby novels right? Im just glad this one has decided to go for some creative ideas.

Im so glad I come back to this trashheap of an app to scout out some gems every now and then. This fanfic is a great concept married with an enthusiastic amateur author that results in a fic full of passion. The only negative is sentence structure holding it back from becoming one of the greats. That being said, someone with great writing skills wouldn’t be writing this but some generic “original” (ptui) harem R18 slop that nobody but poor teenagers want to read so Ill gladly take slightly below good sentence structure with good grammar over what makes me hate most authors on this site. The synposis says it all, that would probably be the end state of this fic and what the author aspires towards, I look forward to the day we get there. 9/10

More annoyed with gamer’s mind. It’s such a cop-out to not have to write his mental state.

I read about 40 chapters, this fanfic is pretty mediocre. It has all the generic chinese tropes and words. While the translator certainly did his work, it’s the bare minimum to be considered not mtl. Most likely he used ChatGPT. Like usual with chinese fics, they have great ideas but never work those ideas out to their full potential.

“The fics concept doesn’t make sense, 1 star!” What about that Harem you love so much, does that make sense? What about being trasmigated in general? Let authors write their creative ideas, if you haven read atleast 30% of the novel/fic what is the point of your opinion besides showing how childish you are?

Classic example of the mental level of the average webnovel enjoyer. If you hate it so much, go write your own garbage smut novel and stop bothering the rest of us.

Honestly, with the story slwoing down to a crawl we kinda hit a boring patch. With the upcoming stories being only fighting, it doesn’t leave me with much confidence that something interesting will happen.

Yo Bob, howya doing. I know you dread this question the most but how is the writers block going? Really miss your tavern fic, truly one of the top tier fics I’ve read

Honestly have not been keeping up with it. Managed to catch a bit while at a hotel and it looked extremely mediocre imo. Probably overhyped

I can see where this is going. Tom is going to hook up with a feline Minks huh?

Im just glad the next character is a normal one

Great stuff, sadly no mass release, guess we reached the end of the stockpile. Love you for your hard work TL!

Honestly a great start to this book. I like the title a lot since it really is all about Tom. Even after he get’s to summon another character, Tom’s role stays strong. The author truly encapsulates the cartoon humor, I cannot praise this enough. Highly recommend this.

Garbage chapter

I mean, sure guns are boring but what about futuristic weaponry? Since he comes from an apocolyptic future it could work great. (Also remembering the infinite ammo rocket launcher from black tech internet cafe had me folded double)

I like Izzy, she is the only one getting actual romantic development. While the rest is just blatent seduction to the harem that would’ve earned a kick in the nuts any other time. Scatach might be the only exeption but that’s because of a timeskip and not actual writing.

You should consider Outlast for the list, let Gotham’s villains know what a truly f’d up asylum is like.

Honestly with all the f’d up mental asylums you should 100% add outlast. Seems like Gothams villains would really appreciate that.

These character pulls really suck huh?

So yeah, guessing esdeath will be next chapter since that fits the description