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SimmeringHours

SimmeringHours

Lv10

Just an ordinary person striving for average things... Nothing to look for here... Now move along please.

2018-11-04 JoinedCanada
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  • SimmeringHours
    SimmeringHours2yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

    Ch 1 Fogged Up (1)
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    Stacking My Abilities
    Fantasy · SmallFries
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  • SimmeringHours
    SimmeringHours2yr
    Commented

    Nice

    Ch 32 The Golden Plate (9)
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    Stacking My Abilities
    Fantasy · SmallFries
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  • SimmeringHours
    SimmeringHours2yr
    Posted

    Writing quality: good grammar. Easy to read. Story development: A lot of action so far. Fast paced. Unlike the other stories, this story has an episodic feel to it Character design: lacks some depth to characters so far. It's like stock characters almost. Updating Stability: daily update of 1 chapter World background: can't tell so far

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    Stacking My Abilities
    Fantasy · SmallFries
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  • SimmeringHours
    SimmeringHours2yr
    Commented

    I swear I read batman

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    Emperor's descendant system
    Fantasy · Yonko_master
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  • SimmeringHours
    SimmeringHours3yr
    Posted

    The story is pretty good so far. I like the quality and detailed background and all, just MC needs to show off power more, though I get why he's not, reasonable motives. Maybe less buildup, more climax scenes. Or just write more, don't leave us waiting. Keep it up!

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    I Click to Level Up!
    Urban · LaughingSalt
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