d_nmalory
I am a normal girl who loves kdramas, novels, my Ate and fried chicken. I'm still trying to figure life out and having fun while doing it.
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The storyline is the strongest point in this novel, the author has a well laid out background that makes the story have a good foundation. I would only comment on the grammar which needs a little polishing but that is not a problem. With just a little editing the book will be an amazing read. Keep it up author
After reading the first few chapters, it is already clear who descriptive the author's style is. The storyline has a lot of promise and the vivid way in which the author builds it is just phenomenal. The only problem is that the language needs some polishing but all in all the book is an amazing read.
The prologue was the most intriguing part and the creativity behind it calls for the readers attention and clings to it. The bits and pieces of mystery that the author gives out in the next chapters are enough bait for readers to continue. The writing style is also very stable and the dose of mystic, the author gives to the characters is refreshing. I'll keep this awesome book and see where it goes
okay, twist🧐
please be prince charming in disguise, not some kidnapper
what???