Review Detail of Sage_HiddenBear in Stacking My Abilities

Writting grammar is good. Easy to read Story starts out with presenting a plot for a fight for survival story with lots of power leveling arcs, and is instead a "im stronk tkme for slice of life" story. So do note its not what is advertised, it is pretty good though as slice of life in a not really poat apocalypse. The characters have honeatly gained access to amenities and other rhings far too easily. The big time skips honestly dont do the story any favors. Plenty of content to be had during those time points. Its honestly a shame the author didnt take the time to craft it out. Characters are noraml. Nothing really aticks out positively or negatively. World background is a slightly different take on an apocalypse wifh magic and monsters but doesnt really delve into it at all. Overall Id rate it a 6/10. Very average. Really needs a more thorough story board. As well, it also needs more fleshed out content. Time skips are not replacements to good plot.