Lumpish_Haggard
Hello Fellow Daoists! How are you? I just wrote this Novel on a whim but I won't be going on any hiatus before completing it..Stick around if you like the novel and you can also drop by later to check if you didn't like it now. I am always grateful for all the criticisms and suggestions that you guys might have!
This is a very refreshing 'Evil Protagonist' story as it steps away from the overused clichés of the Xuanhuan and xianxia genre. Although it has a reincarnation and system attribute to it, The author very cleverly twists the plot again and again and keeps you excited for what's coming next. Looking Forward for the next chapter!
Well, this novel is one of the first origin novels that i had started to read and i must say that the Author is truly hardworking and has a stable update rate that is welly good for a new writer. other than this his work's quality is also slowly improving and maturing along the time so that in this last chapter we see less and less spelling problems and grammar mistakes. also his writing style is also improving and we see much lesser the rash descriptions and jumping here and there rashly without explanations. All of this is show that our author is doing his best but there is one main problem that Author hadn't try to solve it and that is the storyline. this novel's story line is a huge mess and empty nothing MC not only is an idiot that himself thinks he's smart but to this point of story except the first chapter that we now he died and reincarnated for Dracula we didn't know anything else why he's going to tournaments while he crushed them and why again and again and thousand of problem that there is while the story don't have a purpose and even Author himself don't know what is his goal Storyline and characters are terrible and Author seriously must sit and thinks for a plan and storyline and purpose for his novel Just updating never was something good and never is I thinks this Novel's Ranking already wonderful for this terrible storyline and character Design and certainly in the future the rank of novel will be decreasing with coming of good other novel
This has just become one of my favourite books, original or not, AND I NEED MORE CHAPTERS!! The MC is smart and does not lose his **** when a girl smiles at him. There is no BS about killing one dude who then calls his dad who then calls HIS dad who then calls their FUCKING ANCESTOR into it all. He may be a little too OP but it fits the story and the MC's actions truly fit the description of a vampire and not just some wanna-be MC that the author bullshits new things about him every time. NEED MORE CHAPTERS!!!!
So far this novel has given me a lot of excitement, the current flow, development, and character is amazing (in a condition that i have to pretend that i dont have any knowledge about the bloodline). I know it is still to early to say that this novel will become another epic novel, as many geniuses fall before they reach the apex’s. But i have a certain feeling that around chapter 300 and so on will be your first bottlenecks.