The story started great. It then became horribly dull and stupid. I believe the best part was the first town. Everything after that is rushed garbage. Many parts feel like you missed a chapter. I found myself checking if I had missed a chapter at some point because author jumped to a course of events that had no build up whatsoever, and no logical reasoning behind them. I almost dropped it at that point, but then I thought...hey, he's just a beginner and this is an original story. He should improve the more he writes, right? This is only going to get better, right? Wrong! It only gets worse... The worst part is that Tarun *SPOILER ALERT* gets raped by an army of demons..and I don't mean raped like with punches and attacks...I mean sexually gangbanged...I'm disgusted by this author. Horrible story...
Lumpish_Haggard
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LIKEtoo late! ( sees a mob of giant lust crazed demon gorillas with 9-feet long tri-c.ocks stampeding towards you)
Oniichan_Thickskin:*shivered *cover up butthole ....erm...I was never here then....