Sir u r doing good work, but plz give us chapters quick, story is good, Mc growth also good, but chapter is to short, for example in chapter around one & two things & chapters close, sorry to say but what I mean chapter is to short I feel, sir u r a good writer, u have more capabilities than that sir. So best of luck.
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