It's nice seeing another evil novel here. The characters and world look nice. The only thing bothering me is the grammar. But besides that it is a nice read. I will wait for more chapters to decide on it.
Lumpish_Haggard
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LIKELumpish_Haggard:But yeah, I Have to work on my grammar...Well actually, i just write it really fast and don't proofread it.. i just skim through it and some mistakes are left as it is....uuugghh...*sob*sob*sob...proofreading is soo time consuming...
You could possibly have editors for your earlier chapters from someone in your discord or your contacts in email; I highly recommend anyone who wishes to "Make Your Story Great Again" (#MYSGA), to be able to assist on your journey to high authorship!
Lumpish_Haggard:But yeah, I Have to work on my grammar...Well actually, i just write it really fast and don't proofread it.. i just skim through it and some mistakes are left as it is....uuugghh...*sob*sob*sob...proofreading is soo time consuming...