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Review Detail of VEGEKU in Sovereign of Blood

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VEGEKU
VEGEKULv66yrVEGEKU

Well, this novel is one of the first origin novels that i had started to read and i must say that the Author is truly hardworking and has a stable update rate that is welly good for a new writer. other than this his work's quality is also slowly improving and maturing along the time so that in this last chapter we see less and less spelling problems and grammar mistakes. also his writing style is also improving and we see much lesser the rash descriptions and jumping here and there rashly without explanations. All of this is show that our author is doing his best but there is one main problem that Author hadn't try to solve it and that is the storyline. this novel's story line is a huge mess and empty nothing MC not only is an idiot that himself thinks he's smart but to this point of story except the first chapter that we now he died and reincarnated for Dracula we didn't know anything else why he's going to tournaments while he crushed them and why again and again and thousand of problem that there is while the story don't have a purpose and even Author himself don't know what is his goal Storyline and characters are terrible and Author seriously must sit and thinks for a plan and storyline and purpose for his novel Just updating never was something good and never is I thinks this Novel's Ranking already wonderful for this terrible storyline and character Design and certainly in the future the rank of novel will be decreasing with coming of good other novel

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Sovereign of Blood

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Lumpish_Haggard
Lumpish_HaggardAuthorLumpish_Haggard

ahahahaha....exactly! a mess of a clusterf*ck this is

VEGEKU
VEGEKULv6VEGEKU

Thanks Author for reading my review and Also for having high aspect for reading this Review and Not Dying from anger I must tell you that i read your novel every day and thanked it but i Wrote this Review to that you seriously think for a storyline and goal for your novel thanks again

Lumpish_Haggard:ahahahaha....exactly! a mess of a clusterf*ck this is
Lumpish_Haggard
Lumpish_HaggardAuthorLumpish_Haggard

Don't worry, I don't mind review. It's what you truly feel! You can even bump down the stars and it won't matter. Chill ma boi.

VEGEKU:Thanks Author for reading my review and Also for having high aspect for reading this Review and Not Dying from anger I must tell you that i read your novel every day and thanked it but i Wrote this Review to that you seriously think for a storyline and goal for your novel thanks again
VEGEKU
VEGEKULv6VEGEKU

Well the True purpose of that Review is that you read it and if you feel that i said the right thing then trying to solved them I'm not the person who insults others Just Trying yo Improve myself and others

Lumpish_Haggard:Don't worry, I don't mind review. It's what you truly feel! You can even bump down the stars and it won't matter. Chill ma boi.