I_love_Rem
This is my first time reading a shield hero fan-fic. And I love this story so far and writting quality is also better compared to some other fan-fics I have read. So thats why I am giving It 5stars. And few words for the author. I love your fan-fics brother .Not only this one but the DxD one too . Keep up the good work.
Keep the chapters coming! :-) Writing - minuscule and rare spelling mistakes, but there is one thing you could improve. Your conversations have a rather bad format (NAME - "Conversation"), it's okayish, but IMO there is a better way to do it. ---- Ex. "Let's do it tonight!" Hiro said with a smirk on his face. "Do you mean THAT?!" asked Eclair with a big blush on her face. ---- I think it's way more professional to do it this way :-) I don't have anything bad to say about anything else, maybe too much sugar in a couple of the latest chapters :-) But it's a sense of style, your book your rules :-). All in all - a good job!
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I really liked this story and it is a shame it is not going to be finished. In fact I liked this fanfic better then the original source story. Author if you can't write it yourself maybe make an outline and have someone else to the fleshing of the story out. Then you can read their work and have them adjust it to match your vision. You are a good writer please find a way to continue bring your vision to everyone.
Good story, great characters and amazing fluff. I was a bit iffy to start reading this novel, since the beginning is a bit weird but eventually gets it's groove and it's been amazing. Like the title says it's more about slice of life and faceslapping without the fake drama that the usual MC's create. All with the amazing fluff, specially the fluff. Anyway, worth a shot and after getting past the first few chapters.
I really like the unique way that I_love_Rem writes. It is interesting and doesnβt make my eyes that tired... Anyways, novel/fanfic is also great and although I never reading The Rising of the Shield Hero, I still enjoy this novel. The author does a good job explaining the original and keeping the balance between eroticism and action. Even though the release rate is slow (to me) it is still great... This great man also introduced me into the world of yanderes... Keep up the great work, I_love_Rem! P.S. Even though I have not read your Dxd fanfic, which I will btw, I am very impressed. I hope you pick up the flow with that too...
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I_LOVE_REM kept balance between the Water Tribes, Earth Kingdom, Fire Nation, and Air Nomads. But that all changed when the cubital tunnel syndrome attacked. Only the Avatar mastered all four elements. Only he could stop the ruthless boredom , but when the world needed him most, he vanished. i want to see the rise of our yandere loving hero get well soon~~~
NOOOOOO!!!!! WHY DID U DELETE IT?!?!?!?!? i mean i understand u not appreciating people who criticize u like who doesnt when they took their time doin somethin but still there were others waiting for u to keep it up man i mean like MY SWEET YANDERE VERSIONS OF MILFS!!!!!!!NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!(** i personnaly had no problem just waiting for u to keep updatin here and i also liked ur *** scenes except the shop uncle being wiped of course!!!!).anyway i guess ill just go on fastnovel and keep reading and hopefully u wont change the story too much there cuz it was amazing.