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Yep, he's just writing what he wants, regardless of the story itself. Which is very sad because all of his stories have a great start.
Exactly! It gets very confusing.
Or even the glaring fact that he introduced the some people or elements to the story twice because he forgot about them. Or gets the MC name switched with other novels he's writting every chapter multiple times... Also no grammar correction whatsoever. Does things add up save him a lot of time, which is a shame because he had some amazing stories.
Akikan can get a lot of chapters a day because he has no defined plot nor consistency, he just writes whatever he wants at the time which makes it a lot easier. You on the other hand are actually writing a solid story, which is very diferent. Keep it up, and thanks for the chapter!
That doesn't make any sense, limiting his imagination would only happen if he had any... Looking thru media to expand his horizons and get ideas sounds more productive. Or at least if he researched on it, like from the science point of view to look at the properties. Even imagination increases the more knowledge and ideas one gathers about the subject even if it's not 100% correct. Doing nothing on the other hand is just plain dumb.
Ok you're definitely right, specially about needing to understand the world from scratch, since nothing beats experiencing this by yourself. But then again I also just realized I'm making assumptions about his knowledge of anime \ novels, since i assumed it would at least above average since he spent so long in the Hospital. Which would make for more options to choose from. But it's a bit off putting knowing he choose such a dangerous world without much knowledge. **: Just to make it clear, I have no problems with your writing and story. You're doing great. Just commenting on the 'MC' ;) Keep it up!
That much i understand. But choosing a world with so little information about it, is pretty much suicidal. There are plenty of animes with worlds that turn out to be a lot more complex that initially showed or are just simply misleading which makes them incredibly dangerous or very hard to make relevant changes. Can you imagine someone picking "Higurashi no Naku Koro Ni" based on the first episode?..
Seriously, don't tell me he picked a deadly world to live the rest of his life based on one scene!! I don't mind an MC not knowing the story, but considering he picked the world, it's the height of stupidity. There are plenty of animes with terrible sadistic worlds. Imagine if he picked Akame ga Kill blindly?..
Yep.. Ever since Fleur showed up everything has been going downhill. And to make matters worse, Reima has been warned of the prophecy about Ciri and he made 0 preparations for it, specially when it involved a race that can travel worlds with an endless possibilities of technology, magic or people. I lost all motivation to read this.. It's like the Author is sabotaging his novel =S ... Dropped.
Wow! You should really change this novel title, or at least remove the all cap. I thought it was an half assed crack-fic but it turns out it's a thought out one. Seriously, this is shaping up to be a great novel so i really hope you can keep it up. You'll have my vote!