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Odeath

Odeath

Lv5
2018-04-29 JoinedUnited Kingdom
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  • Odeath
    Odeath2yr
    Commented

    Football, because Baseball is only fun in anime. Thanks for the chapter!

    Ch 241 Shishio would eat anything
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    I Refuse to Become Scumbag in Tokyo
    Anime & Comics · akikan40
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  • Odeath
    Odeath3yr
    Commented

    Dragonborn (Skyrim) in Danmachi. I know there are a few of them out there, but they are all abandoned or just plain horrible.

    Ch 251 Announcement <New Book(s)>
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    Broly The Saiyan of Legend!
    Anime & Comics · Draugzel
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  • Odeath
    Odeath3yr
    Commented

    Wow, I hope this gets better because there is barely any development here... way to rushed.

    Ch 9 New School; Hectic First Day (2:1)
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    Tale of Discovery
    Anime & Comics · Exalted_Felix
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  • Odeath
    Odeath3yr
    Commented

    Dropped, too much cringe in the last chapters. This is really painful to read.

    Ch 17 Pokemon master of tactics: Chapter 17
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    Pokemon: Master of tactics
    Anime & Comics · alex02373
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  • Odeath
    Odeath3yr
    Replied to Afonso_Aaron

    Dokidoki Little Ooyasan.

    Ch 53 At the mountain
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    H Mission Commencing!!
    Anime & Comics · Kahel
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  • Odeath
    Odeath3yr
    Replied to Tlep

    One tail only, so maybe Yoruichi?

    Ch 53 At the mountain
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    H Mission Commencing!!
    Anime & Comics · Kahel
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  • Odeath
    Odeath3yr
    Commented

    Really? No comments on the stealth Pikachu? xD

    Ch 31 Sand Mr. 18 Plus
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    H Mission Commencing!!
    Anime & Comics · Kahel
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  • Odeath
    Odeath3yr
    Replied to Victor_Weismann

    Yep, he's just writing what he wants, regardless of the story itself. Which is very sad because all of his stories have a great start.

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  • Odeath
    Odeath3yr
    Replied to Ruined_Herrscher

    Exactly! It gets very confusing.

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  • Odeath
    Odeath3yr
    Replied to Victor_Weismann

    Or even the glaring fact that he introduced the some people or elements to the story twice because he forgot about them. Or gets the MC name switched with other novels he's writting every chapter multiple times... Also no grammar correction whatsoever. Does things add up save him a lot of time, which is a shame because he had some amazing stories.

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  • Odeath
    Odeath3yr
    Commented

    Akikan can get a lot of chapters a day because he has no defined plot nor consistency, he just writes whatever he wants at the time which makes it a lot easier. You on the other hand are actually writing a solid story, which is very diferent. Keep it up, and thanks for the chapter!

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  • Odeath
    Odeath3yr
    Replied to Kusuon_4706

    That doesn't make any sense, limiting his imagination would only happen if he had any... Looking thru media to expand his horizons and get ideas sounds more productive. Or at least if he researched on it, like from the science point of view to look at the properties. Even imagination increases the more knowledge and ideas one gathers about the subject even if it's not 100% correct. Doing nothing on the other hand is just plain dumb.

    Ch 168 Lesson
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    The Lust System
    Urban · Elfriedenn
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  • Odeath
    Odeath3yr
    Replied to SkyInTheNight

    Ok you're definitely right, specially about needing to understand the world from scratch, since nothing beats experiencing this by yourself. But then again I also just realized I'm making assumptions about his knowledge of anime \ novels, since i assumed it would at least above average since he spent so long in the Hospital. Which would make for more options to choose from. But it's a bit off putting knowing he choose such a dangerous world without much knowledge. **: Just to make it clear, I have no problems with your writing and story. You're doing great. Just commenting on the 'MC' ;) Keep it up!

    Ch 11 Shining Moon Inn
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    Is it Wrong to be Reincarnated after Death?
    Anime & Comics · SkyInTheNight
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  • Odeath
    Odeath3yr
    Replied to SkyInTheNight

    That much i understand. But choosing a world with so little information about it, is pretty much suicidal. There are plenty of animes with worlds that turn out to be a lot more complex that initially showed or are just simply misleading which makes them incredibly dangerous or very hard to make relevant changes. Can you imagine someone picking "Higurashi no Naku Koro Ni" based on the first episode?..

    Ch 11 Shining Moon Inn
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    Is it Wrong to be Reincarnated after Death?
    Anime & Comics · SkyInTheNight
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  • Odeath
    Odeath3yr
    Replied to PrimordialVampire

    Seriously, don't tell me he picked a deadly world to live the rest of his life based on one scene!! I don't mind an MC not knowing the story, but considering he picked the world, it's the height of stupidity. There are plenty of animes with terrible sadistic worlds. Imagine if he picked Akame ga Kill blindly?..

    Ch 11 Shining Moon Inn
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    Is it Wrong to be Reincarnated after Death?
    Anime & Comics · SkyInTheNight
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  • Odeath
    Odeath3yr
    Commented

    "the guy who created the OST for fairy tail is a True God of music." - So true! One of my favorite OSTs. Thanks for the chapter!

    Ch 24 CH 20: DUNGEON(4)
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    Crazy Girls : Crossover Yandere Harem
    Anime & Comics · HIKARU_GENJI
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  • Odeath
    Odeath3yr
    Replied to THICCBOY_97

    Yep.. Ever since Fleur showed up everything has been going downhill. And to make matters worse, Reima has been warned of the prophecy about Ciri and he made 0 preparations for it, specially when it involved a race that can travel worlds with an endless possibilities of technology, magic or people. I lost all motivation to read this.. It's like the Author is sabotaging his novel =S ... Dropped.

    Ch 733 Solemn Sacrifice
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    Elder Blood Witcher
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  • Odeath
    Odeath3yr
    Commented

    Thanks for chapter!

    Ch 563 Mash it Up
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    Goddess Collector (Stopped and rewritten under new title.)
    Anime & Comics · FanHarem
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  • Odeath
    Odeath3yr
    Posted

    Turns out this is a pretty thought out Fic, No imediate OP MC, mega-crossover that actually meshes together with a nice pacing. Definitely worth the read.

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    Crazy Girls : Crossover Yandere Harem
    Anime & Comics · HIKARU_GENJI
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  • Odeath
    Odeath3yr
    Commented

    Wow! You should really change this novel title, or at least remove the all cap. I thought it was an half assed crack-fic but it turns out it's a thought out one. Seriously, this is shaping up to be a great novel so i really hope you can keep it up. You'll have my vote!

    Ch 23 CH 19: DUNGEON(3)
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    Crazy Girls : Crossover Yandere Harem
    Anime & Comics · HIKARU_GENJI
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