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Seduce the hero's mother (GL)

Author: Meredit_Yuri
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I am reborn as a minor character and the mother of the main character, the deposed ruler Leriana Ashford. My husband's younger brother will stage a rebellion against him, and only my young children will manage to escape. And the unfortunate Queen Leriane faces a bleak end. According to the plot, my heroine will sacrifice her life during the rebellion to save her children. Except she won't! Dying at twenty-seven is too soon for me and I'm going to change the tragic plot of this novella. I was lucky enough to be reborn ten years before the events of the novel began. At a time when the future King Philip and his brother Razor had just fallen in love with me at the Royal Academy, and their fight for me led to a feud. To survive - I decided not to become queen and live a quiet life with my father the Duke. And in order to rid myself of these two, I had to go to extreme measures. I decided to start dating the daughter of the cursed Duke, who is feared and hated by the entire academy.

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Chapter 1Prologue

The tip of the cold blade was aimed at the neck of a young woman who was protecting her children with her breasts, and looked with hatred at the man who threatened her.

It was Leriana Ashford, the youngest ruler of the kingdom of Azeroth in its entire history. She was known for her exquisite beauty and outstanding abilities, but none of this brought her happiness.

In the end, there was an uprising, and her husband, the king, was killed. Now, there was only herself and her children, the heirs to the throne, whom she had to protect at all costs.

The boy and the girl had the same beautiful emerald hair as their mother, and they looked no more than seven years old. The woman herself is not even thirty. She was very young, but despite this, she was not afraid to take over the country.

«Give up and give them to me,» the dark — haired man who looked so much like her husband growled, «You know it's over.» Just give up, and then I'll let you live.

It was her husband's younger brother, Razor Blanche, whom she had once considered her friend. However, it was he who, as a result, stabbed them in the back, staged an uprising, and killed all the supporters of the king.

Leriana's husband, King Philip, fell with his brother in an unequal battle, trying with his last strength to defend the throne. Now, of the current members of the royal family, there were only three of them left — and literally a couple of millimeters separated Leriana from being in the next world with her husband.

However, the woman simply could not afford to give up when the lives of her children were hanging by a thread.

— You'll never get them,» Leriana hissed furiously, protecting her daughter and son with her whole body, «You'd better kill me, but don't touch innocent souls!»

Razor's grimace twisted unpleasantly.

— Leriana, why are you so protective of them?! — He exclaimed, — Neither this bastard nor his children are worth anything! He couldn't even protect you! Is it really this little person that you chose instead of me…?!

The woman held back the tears that came to her eyes when it came to the man she loved so much. And the one I lost.

«You're a monster,» she said, «you betrayed your own brother for your own greed!» Do you call this a fair fight?! You're just a coward and nothing more…!

Razor, hearing her words, became considerably enraged.

— Shut up! «I'm giving you one last chance!» he bellowed. Give me those puppies, otherwise… I will make sure that your name is erased from the history of this country as well as that jerk!

Realizing that it was impossible to pull further, and every second could cost the lives of her children, Leriana decided to take desperate measures.

She suddenly pounced on Razor, biting into his arm. And at the same moment, she managed to shout:

— Brisney, Josh, hurry up and run!

Since she didn't have any fighting skills, Leriana didn't expect to win in this fight. She just wanted to get time so that her daughter and son could escape.

The children, at first numb with fear, reacted quickly and ran away. Tears were streaming down their cheeks, but there was nothing they could do. After all, their mother had paid too great a price to give them this chance, and they simply could not miss it.

— DAMN…!

Realizing that those he was hunting were already far away, Razor's blade pierced Leriana's body out of anger. Unable to stand it for long, she let go of his hand, and fell to the floor, bleeding.

Feeling that her mouth was becoming more and more filled with crimson liquid, and her consciousness was plunging into darkness, Leriana, meanwhile, was happy.

Her children were saved, and that was the only thing she was worried about.

Now, she could go to the next world in peace.

Razor, who had loved her madly throughout his life, bent over her, but it was too late.

Leriana stopped breathing.

Perhaps it was only now, in the last seconds before her death, that she realized how hard her life had been.

From studying at the Royal Academy, where she met Crown Prince Philip, and fell in love with him, and ending today, her life has never been calm.

Political intrigues, the struggle for power and the opportunity to be with her beloved, exhausted her mentally and physically. And in the end, it all ended up with her losing everything.

So was this game worth the candle then…?

If a few years ago, Philip and Razor had not fallen in love with her, and this would not have marked the beginning of their bloody feud, could everything have ended differently …?

Leriana Ashford always wanted to know the answer to this question, but she never had time to get it.

After all, she died too soon, and her happy life, of which she dreamed so much, was never destined to come true.

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Volume 1
Volume 2
Volume 3
Volume 4

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Adalfarus
AdalfarusLv14

A Compelling Novel with Missed Opportunities in Story Development The novel under review, set in a vividly imagined medieval world, presents a gripping storyline and well-developed characters that make for an overall enjoyable reading experience. However, it is not without its flaws. The story development takes an unfortunate turn at the end of the first volume, as pivotal decisions made by the author on behalf of the characters seem to lack coherence and emotional resonance. One such decision involves the treatment of Rachel, a crucial character in the narrative. The choice to abandon her and label her as a monster, as dictated by the author, is not only heart-wrenching but also conflicts with the promise made to her and her father. This betrayal not only shatters Rachel's trust but also seems to be an unnecessary plot device that detracts from the emotional impact of the story. An alternative path that the protagonist could have considered would have been to take Rachel with them when escaping from the clutches of the crown prince. This course of action might have prevented the devastating consequences that followed, such as Rachel losing one of her flower petals and a significant amount of life. Additionally, the choice to betray Rachel has far-reaching implications, as it strains the relationship between two influential families and potentially the imperial family as well. The King might choose to side with Leriana's father, a close friend. This alliance is likely to start a feud with Rachel's father over the broken promise, further intensifying the conflict surrounding their families, which could lead to much bloodshed, as they control half the military of the empire. While the novel's overall quality is commendable, the storyline at the end of the first volume, and subsequently all volumes thereafter, could have benefitted from more thoughtful development by the author. By exploring alternative paths for the characters and maintaining consistency in their actions, the narrative would have been more engaging and emotionally satisfying. Nonetheless, readers who appreciate intricate plotlines and rich character development will still find much to enjoy in this fascinating tale. The novel leaves us questioning the author's choices, but eager to see how the story unfolds in subsequent volumes. Total score 3.4, because all criteria except story development are good. Suggested Revision: A simple solution to address this issue could be to alter the protagonist's actions towards Rachel. Instead of explicitly calling her a monster, the protagonist could choose to leave without saying anything. As a result, the events surrounding the loss of Rachel's flower petal could unfold differently. For instance, Rachel might feel betrayed because the protagonist left without an explanation, or someone else could spread lies about the protagonist's reasons for leaving, leading to a more reasonable portrayal of the protagonist's actions. This adjustment could strengthen the emotional resonance of the story and maintain the protagonist's integrity.

Yuri_is_Life
Yuri_is_LifeLv12

Who should read and pay for this work? Only those who are in ABSOLUTE despair to read completed Yuri novel, despite its poor quality. 1) It is worth saying right away that the author has absolutely no respect for readers. She obviously does not know English, so she writes in her native language and then uses an online translator. This is not a problem in general, many people do it... But author did not even bother to correct the basic pronouns errors. This is not only disrespectful to readers, but also just stupid!!! Many who could potentially buy this just drop it halfway!!! 2) Our heroine, Leriane, is the most hated character in this story (I would even say on the whole webnovell). She's dumb, naive and useless (but everyone loves her). She's the kind of person who doesn't deserve a happy ending. There was a scene in the book when Leriane was being held hostage and the maids wanted to disfigure her face. My reaction: fair, maybe it will teach her something!!! 3) The story could have been more or less Ok if the author had adhered to the spirit of the first volume. Then it seemed that this was a typical Mary Sue story with dense MC and comedic undertone. But then the author decided that she wanted to write a serious story with all sorts of betrayals, hidden villains, visions of the future and so on... But you can't just WANT to write a masterpiece. That requires talent or a hard work... 4) Most of the story we have a one-sided romance. For most of the story, Leriane feels asexual-aromantic and only at the end she begin to be more proactive. If you are one of those who are satisfied with the fact that high-quality mutual yuri will only be at the end, then Ok. But I prefer that the main couple become an official at least in the middle of the story. If not, then there must be at least passion and tension between them. And I'm not talking about smut. But at least something. But alas. Dense asexual-aromantic, remember?

Nocturnal314
Nocturnal314Lv13

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