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It's actually a really funny and cute story. You've done a really good job with your writing quality. Your grammar, spelling and punctuation are excellent. Your story development is also really good. You started in the future, then went back in time, which is really good. It makes the story interesting. Your character design is also quite good. I like your female lead. She's funny.
F.a.s.c.i.n.a.t.i.n.g and very well written book. Beautifully written story and characters. Dazzling five stars for author's style of writing as I like it a lot. Author is great with her choice of words and her style in structuring sentence. Her writing is cool and she is very great in writing the dialogue. You could feel the characters through their interaction which is written in fresh and unique style. I find the writing here is up to professional standard as throughout the story you will find little to no mistake in grammar. This book is extremely comfortable to read, way above most of webnovels. Writing wise, story wise, characters wise, female lead wise, humour wise. All rightly deserve perfect five stars. The way author introduced and explained things is good. Story development has been good so far, the anticipation and guessing keeps me at the edge every time. The story is filled with emotions and feelings that are portrayed well. I've read a lot of webnovels and this book is among top list that I could find myself so immerse with the story. Believe me this author is really talented and creative writer. Please if you could keep your regular updates I could see there will be a time for this book to get well recognised. Very promising book. I'm not trying to be cheesy here but it's my honest review of this book as I genuinely like this book. My appreciation for good quality book. The bad: It's hard to find flaw in this book really, as this book is almost flawless. From writing, story, characters and everything is good. So I could only pointed out it personal. Personally, so far I find it hard to like Jordan, I don't know why but don't get me wrong his character is interesting, again it's my personal opinion. Cover is not good enough for a story as good as this. And the last, it's shame to say but the level of writing in this book (for me personally as a writer) is discouraging. I mean, writing wise, this book is great to the point I ask myself, why do I write. I wish I could write like this someday, well don't mind me. Again, the writing is what I like most in this book. However, I got bad omen regarding the direction of the story is heading, knowing the future in the first chapter and from the title. I mean look at the title: Love FOUND and LOST. not LOST AND FOUND. it could be just my feeling, I hope the story ends on happy note, for Rosemary and Mr Parker. It's truly great reading experience! Best luck for you!
I feel like... I just read a script for a future drama. The novel is in POVs and you get the idea of how each character feels and thinks. I like how the author writes dialogues and made it realistic. Only thing I would suggest is to reread and fix some pronouns and sentence structures. If you are looking for the next drama, miscommunication, heartache, and love- READ THIS BOOK!
Such a promising premise on the synopsis and how the title speaks itself will let you know what really will happen throughout the story. And that's how I like you conveyed everything in the very sense. It's really different from the way you write, and you are so great! Do a good job on continuing this masterpiece!
first of all, a stunning cover you have there. I thought this book would be very much a drama. well, I really shouldn't judge by its cover. I've read a view chapter and it's a really good story. Got the romance, comedy part, and I think all part of the tags is portrayed really well. The story is relatable for me as well and it is very easy to accept. Great work, Author!!
Love wrecks you. Love kills you. Love shatters you. Although you know the truth about what love would do to you, you still fall in love. Hard and deep. Skylar and Jordan's story is story of love,pain a me finding the real them. Skylar had to let go of her past and win ever battle with the ugly secrets that are rearing its ugly head again. A pact went right or wrong only the lord knows but it gave Jordan a reason ie. Skylar. But Skylar departure shattered him.... I know the truth of the story, I know it will wreck me and leave me a crying mess though there is loads of comedy but emotions hit home especially when some one leaves without any reasons and a goodbye . I'm not crying you are. 😭