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Rome on Middle Earth

Author: NightCrusade
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The legions of rome were about to go back to their camp after recently winning another battle when a flash of light from the sky blinded everyone, next thing they knew there is mist around them and 13 dwarves and an old man with a pointy hat running towards them with a horde of goblins chasing them. Watch the Legions of Rome fight their enemies as once again they make the world tremble as they participate in earth shaking battles, Battle of the six army, Battle of Helms deep, Battle of Minas Tirith, and Battle of the Black Gate. Cover Art Credit: Leo Karpacz Map of middle earth: https://www.pinterest.ph/pin/506021708127327099/ I do not own any characters and images in the story.

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AzureWolf
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This novel is middling. The thought of Rome troops arriving in LOTR and showing their talent from rigorous training to the whole of middle earth is something special. Though there are parts of the story are good there are parts that take away from it just as much. One of my main complaints is that POV changes are way too rapid. In one chapter there were 3 pov changes and sometimes the story randomly goes from first person to third back to first. It's annoying due to the fact I kept reading dialog thinking it was the prince but it was someone else and once I got that sorted out the POV changes into someone else not long after. The characters dialog need at least 1 or 2 chapters to not disorient readers of this story. One of my minor problems is the awkward meeting with the elves and their strange personality which does not fit in the world of middle earth. It felt like was reading a group of people from a Chinese novel. Another one of the minor problems is the unnecessary foreshadowing which happens every 2-3 chapters. They take away more then they give to a story. I do not know why authors think that it's a good idea to do such a thing. An example of one of them from the story is. Character A does not know that tomorrow will be a legendary battle would happen and that it will make all of middle earth tremble. There are multiple foreshadowing of this kind through out the story. its jarring to say the least. Every time I come across one I sigh, skip it, and then move one. There are other minor problems, but, I don't want to spend my time writing a wall of text that hardly anyone cares about.

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