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callumdunn1
callumdunn1Lv44yr
2020-05-19 06:09

It’s pretty good but the update are pretty slow ........................................................................................................................................

Rome on Middle Earth

NightCrusade
4.5
45 Chs

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AFJDS
AFJDSLv13

Concentrated badassery I can’t find any faults to the story, of course there is room for improvement but I love the battles, they are very well described and the author makes the story very interesting without boring moments that you want to skip

4yr

Juanroberts11
Juanroberts11Lv14

LOVE WAR AND EPIC BATTLE STORIES WITH FANTASY THIS IS THE STORY FOR YOU IT IS EPIC!!!!!!!! war_WAR_war_WAR_war_WAR_war_WAR_war_WAR_war_WAR_war_WAR_war_WAR_war_WAR_war_WAR_war_WAR_war_WAR_war_WAR_war_WAR_war_WAR_war_WAR_war_WAR_war_WAR_

4yr
Dan_B_3831
Dan_B_3831Lv11

Why don't you update 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭please update🙏🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼

3yr
AzureWolf
AzureWolfLv5

This novel is middling. The thought of Rome troops arriving in LOTR and showing their talent from rigorous training to the whole of middle earth is something special. Though there are parts of the story are good there are parts that take away from it just as much. One of my main complaints is that POV changes are way too rapid. In one chapter there were 3 pov changes and sometimes the story randomly goes from first person to third back to first. It's annoying due to the fact I kept reading dialog thinking it was the prince but it was someone else and once I got that sorted out the POV changes into someone else not long after. The characters dialog need at least 1 or 2 chapters to not disorient readers of this story. One of my minor problems is the awkward meeting with the elves and their strange personality which does not fit in the world of middle earth. It felt like was reading a group of people from a Chinese novel. Another one of the minor problems is the unnecessary foreshadowing which happens every 2-3 chapters. They take away more then they give to a story. I do not know why authors think that it's a good idea to do such a thing. An example of one of them from the story is. Character A does not know that tomorrow will be a legendary battle would happen and that it will make all of middle earth tremble. There are multiple foreshadowing of this kind through out the story. its jarring to say the least. Every time I come across one I sigh, skip it, and then move one. There are other minor problems, but, I don't want to spend my time writing a wall of text that hardly anyone cares about.

4yr
darktone
darktoneLv12

It's a great book!! There are a few errors but nothing major. I've loved the lord of the rings since I was a little kid and I've read almost all of Tolkien's works and have a very extensive knowledge of middle earth. I've always been fascinated with ancient Rome and have studied them and their way of life since I was a little kid. I have a very large amount of knowledge when it comes to Rome and middle earth l. I ask that you please pick the story back up, and if you dont want to continue writing it would you allow me to take it over and continue it?

3yr
Iden_GodKeeper
Iden_GodKeeperLv1

It's a best story for me. Very much time i search storyes about LOTR and find it. Fine, it's very good story, but updating....mmm....khm....not bad. I think, you must update this story faster. Seriosly. I need more.

4yr
Cairos
CairosLv15

A beautiful fan fiction and I want more of it. The characters are well written and the world building from the Lord of the Rings is well researched and the mixture between Roman military and Middle Earth lore is fascinating.

4yr
TheTrueGilgamesh
TheTrueGilgameshLv6

Not bad but also not that good but hey i like it🤟 i think you should fix Darius personality it just doesn't suit him giving that kind of care-free vibe especially when you know what kind of soldier Darius is base of anyways it's good

4yr
daosit2900
daosit2900Lv14

This novel is good,..............................warrrrrrrrrrrrttrttttrrtrtrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrttrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrŕrtrrrrrrrr

4yr
Human7710
Human7710Lv2

I absolutely love the story. I enjoy how it's based on Tolkiens Lord Of the Rings and cant wait to see how Rome makes their impact upon Middle Earth. It's also just a cool idea to see how one of the older history best trained and organized militaries would do in a fantasy world. There isn't a massive need to develop world background as it's based on LOTR which is one of the most worlds developed stories of all time. So if you enjoy LOTR and enjoy the mighty roman empire then this story definitely has a promising future.

4yr
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