ranmaro
OK first of look like it’s gonna start getting really good but the character development return it to complete retard and then every elder in this entire story is complete trash. I don’t know if the author has a problem with the elders, but he turned them all into retards, so I’m done this is not good.
Book starts great but the word choices later on leave me disappointed. Like at the start I would give it a straight 5. Sadly later the writing changes as if the author was swapped from an adult to a teenager. It constantly is “this dude”, “that dude” as if a teenager wrote it. I think the word ”dude” is the most used word in this novel and it gets old very fast. Then you have people say things like “how did you know our mighty and scary name”. Or ”this is a really scary dude”.
Hi everyone I just wanted to know is this a slow paced novelcurrently I am on chapter 168 but it feels like MC has not progressed one bit after the initial 30 chapters.Looking at his cheat ability and his future knowledge you expect a fast growth. but here mc is not progressing at allwhich feels kind of forced.
Overall not bad. I read up to 54 but I'll be dropping it. It seems like it's a copy of Tales of Demons and Gods story in similar cultivation, MC, the world being only a little part of the whole thing, and dark spirit guys. Also please look into getting an editor or someone to clean up spelling errors, grammar, and fixing the overall flow.
So I managed to get to chapter 142 till I just have to stop,at this point it's been over 90 chapters since the MC has had any power growth outside of spending 7 chapters learning a skill back around chapter 60 that he still hasn't used yet. The MC despite being a reborn top expert just isn't that smart , he keeps making stupid mistakes and gets pushed around by old men quite a lot. The world building is almost non existent at this point as well, I wished there was at least some humor or something to keep me interested. Since this story is clearly "inspired" by Tales of Demons and Gods it's hard not to compare the 2 and no matter which part you look too; the story progression,characters,humor, or just general world building, this is more than a tier or 2 worse that Tales of Demons and Gods.
Sub chapter 200 this novel seems like a copy of Demons and Gods. It had a good start tbh, but it got worse and worse as it went on. I gave up reading at chap 165 since the MC had the same power level he obtained before chapter 20. Story could be good but the author is making it progress way to slowly and not optimally for a MC that has memories of future events and prior life. MC does not use his brain to the fullest most of the time. Simplistic and side conversations drawn out when they could likely have just been axed entirely without hampering the story. All the powerful people have some kinda overprotective mentality that gets very old very fast… Lastly! The author uses the word “Dude” wayyyy to often