Overall not bad. I read up to 54 but I'll be dropping it. It seems like it's a copy of Tales of Demons and Gods story in similar cultivation, MC, the world being only a little part of the whole thing, and dark spirit guys. Also please look into getting an editor or someone to clean up spelling errors, grammar, and fixing the overall flow.
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