Review Detail of darkface in Reincarnation Of The Strongest Spirit Master

To clarify again, I love the book itself but the constant “dude” makes me want to give up on it. If I could download the entire book and simply delete the word “dude” out of it, it would make it a million times more enjoyable

Ok, can you tell me where did you stop? So I can return to these chapters and edit this annoying DUDE word :))))))

It started ever since meeting Ibra which I believe was around Chapter 240 or so and made me give up around Chapter 300 or so. I reread my review and noticed it does sound a bit harsh but that’s just how frustrated I was. I’ve read tons of books and never actually wrote a review. Seeing this book going from absolutely great to what felt like unreadable was just so frustrating. The MC is supposed to be an old reincarnater but suddenly ge speaks like an angsty teenager. I could understand (not like but understand) if the other children used “dude” but no normal older person speaks like this. Same for using the words of “this scary scary dude/ monster”. Like, sure it is a dangerous enemy but the word scary like that just sounds so childish. I really loved the book until this part.

Ok, noted! I must have got distracted by something and didn't notice the over use of this word. I will return to these chaps and edit them and the rest of the novel ASAP. Thx for pointing out to such a point :)))))) And it's ok, I just like if any of my readers didn't like anything to tell me. I'm not that hard to deal with and ALWAYS take my readers' viewpoints seriously. Thx again and have a nice day :))))))

Thank you! I just opened a random chapter, chapter 448, and read a bit to see if it continues or if it’s just in the part I had read. In 448 I immediately stumbled over this as well: "that dude said that you are the key to this world's destruction or survival, to all the worlds' fate actually” So it seems to continue all the way through. My point here is that no one would call a powerful being that came from another world a “dude”. I know that younger people seem to use “dude” for anything but at least in my generation and later (I am 30) no one uses dude for anything outside of very playful banter. So reading a powerful being called a dude just ruins the immersion a lot for me. Personally, I belive that if you stuck to replacing pretty much all “dudes”, “folk” etc with the normal words like “guy/s” “man/men” etc and words like “scary” with “dangerous” etc it would turn the book back to how amazing it was at the start. Obviously it’s all up to you and just my opinion. Either way, thank you very much for even responding to the review. I hadn’t expected it. I will check on the novel again in a couple of weeks and see if it got edited and becomes enjoyable (for me) again.

I see. It seems I'm going for a full edit tomorrow then :D Will tell you when I finish the edit. Thx again :))))))))))

First of all, I have to thank you a ton. I never imagined this issue to be this big! I spent hours editing and now, starting from ch 200, all of the annoying DUDE word got removed and edited properly. Thanks again! I never expected such a thing to run so deep in the novel. I'll run a check over the first 200 ch tomorrow to make sure things are right and everything is edited properly regarding this word. In form of my appreciation for such help, I'm going to release 6 chaps tomorrow as a Mass Release as a form of thanks. Sorry for the disturbance that happened. And if you met anything annoying again just let me know and I'll deal with it. Thanks bro :))))))))))))

Dear Author, Earlier i was stumped to whether write my reviews or not but seeing such active discussion, i want to list my suggestions too. Personally i really loved your novel on general story basis and innovative ideas of mc but i have a few problems: 1. story pacing is too slow like all events have happened in 1 month or so(which is little balanced by high ch release rate) like their are too detailed descriptions of each day for week or two in continuation which is a bit excessive. Then mc is shown trying to pick fights unnecessarily with far too strong people than his power level which is quite reckless than move made by someone more experienced 2. this is my major issue with this novel. I hate it how mc seems to flirt with small girls(pre-teen) like Berry or teenagers like Sara and Ro when he himself is said to be of 11 y old with appearance of a lean child. Also many times in novel, age of mc is mentioned 8y old which makes this scenario even more annoying. I mean this thing seems nice if mc has mature appearance or is age wise like mid-teens. 3. As mentioned earlier, i also found it strange your way of dialogue in form of 'dude' when your rest of English in story description seems fine. I personally thought this was perhaps dialect or way people of this world speak(like roguish Adventurers of novels) so didn't mind it much. But i really still don't like how sheltered girls like Berry and Sara are shown saying "dude" which is more roguish way of speaking and might seem sometimes fine if its Ro and her team but else it seems been overdone in this novel as any and all characters speak this word like in recent ch 448, old fox also speaks like this 😔

Well good points indeed. As for the pace, I'll change and make it faster in the upcoming chapters, skipping days and weeks from time to time to make things move a bit faster than now. As for the girls issues, I just wanted to plant a seed for the future harem. But in the latest chaps you'll notice he didn't flirt with anyone. And Ro is the one flirting with him, not him :D As for the age, I already did an edit before to change the age of mc and others from 8 to 11. If you spotted anyplace where 8 is mentioned instead of 11 just write a paragraph comment there and I'll immediately edit these parts. The word dude already got removed in total from chap 200 to the current chaps published. I did this last night when I wrote the comment here regarding it. I just left rare incidences where dude word is used, but that doesn't exceed 10 in the around 300 chaps. If you found anything else you want to share anytime feel free to do so. I use your comments and suggestions to edit the story and up its overall level, also helps me a lot to improve my writings. So thx for everything and I hope you enjoy my novel.