This is getting real old dude the whole everybody against him and all this look dude how many freaking chapters do you need for an arc like come on dude tragedy tragedy are you a freaking Greek?

I had hopes, but I don’t know man maybe author is like I don’t know schizo refuses to write decent stories. This is just a piece of trash tragedy so keep on fools.

Whole thing really good but this whole naïve character I just can’t do it man I tried to try to stick with it but when the females are stronger than your male main character, that’s a whole bunch of trash they are author. Good luck to you bro not for me.

I’m almost embarrassed I read this I don’t know if the others trying to write you write a cool OP main character or are you gonna write some drama trash bro Simp are you a Simp author? Is that why you’re riding a Sim character? It’s truly frustrating.

What a drama fire

Well, if you enjoy a story with a main character who is downrod and everybody’s against them, family hates them and all the races hate them and the system. I hate them and Omeal my this is your type of book if you want a normal story no sorry forget it. This is WebNovel, they all write them like that so if you want, everybody gets the main character and him to be a weakling go forward if you like strong main characters which the freaking title would give you that idea that he would be OP and smart and crew, but it’s not true. I don’t read the book.

I had high hopes for this book, but obviously we’re gonna have to go through the 50 or so chapters of poor main character advice against me down meeting. His family hates me. Oh my oh the system is hating on him. Oh goodness trash stupid trash bro no thank you.

All right, I’m done with this dude can we get past this art? I mean there’s a cool story bro but wow drag on a bit.

Yeah, I’m almost done you know y’all was real good for a minute and then he took the path of every WebNovel author you gotta try to turn trash into treasure or treasure to trash. Y’all always do this and typically you do the second one like dirt you had no main character story what day what are you doing dude like this is no one enjoys this like a couple of good fight but this whole poor character just getting beaten up by everybody all the big bad solo pout no no no one likes that fantasy to be enjoyed.

Here we go we have novel number one cliché main character with baggage you know something going on you know there’s a problem your blood is boiling you know there’s a looming threat and you left the retard. Stay beside you send them back to your domain real stupid.

I’ve really enjoyed the story, but man, the author is going wild with all the random points of you and other pieces of the people added to the store, bro just give me the freaking main character

Do you have a Subaru OP main character? Why are you making him be like super naïve and stupid

OK I’m just saying this this was good. All is good it’s good but you I don’t know you seem a little bipolar author do you make your character wanna be lazy and live the former life and take his time and then as soon as you get this second you make him do all these random thingsof getting them sent out I don’t understand it like he doesn’t need the sword marks right now he has the CT been wanting why doesn’t he just maintain his farm anyway

I thought it was gonna be great. The beginning of the first vampire. Unbelievable awesome story. Nope. It’s a simple story with naïve little boy being a night not your vampire bro you’re actually a killer you drink blood to live. It’s an actual horrible story so do not waste your time.

Great we got another author making the main character. Do she Sam Way to go bro he’s a freaking vampire cold-blooded killer what are you doing a woman? Oh bro man I thought it’s gonna be like the epic beginning of the vampire slaying and winning battles you turn this into a Simp.

Like I don’t get it dude got a horrible death. Everything’s going good on this one. He’s got resources now he’s got to cook. I do not understand why you make him go out and do these things now they have their stuff get past a little stages you know there’s no there’s no point it’s foolish now so now you turn to really cool OP character who had a lot of wisdom to foolish one

Love the cold mc. Keep it up

I love the authors work, but man you make so much stuff convoluted like I don’t know if you think it’s exciting or add depth it doesn’t it’s just dumb

I really hope we don’t have a down syndrome moth they just gonna ride an naïve in character. I really hope you’re gonna go down the dark OP path.

Write, you are author write you are Gigi good chapter I like your novels