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ah, I love this story. It's also on my list in ffn.net site/app. I love the writing style, the story progression and the slow(relatively) strenght progression. I love the geek talk with all the medical terms and random bits of information scattered. I love the dynamics between MC and other characters. And I especially love the weekly scheduled updates.
Quality is good but still has misspelling and grammar mistakes. Update is nothing special but still is. World background is the same. Story is fuuuukknnnngg boring as hell! 12 chapters of nothing! Training and training and still heβs weak! No action except one 5 sentences mission. Author thinks that adding BS about mc green jumpsuit is fun and better to concentrate on then to actually progress the story. I donβt know what to say about Mc. Is he an idiot? Probably. Does he think in superhero way? Not really. Does he make any impact in the story? Hell no! Heβs useless in the story! Overall would not recommend, you will just lose time.
i don't know if everyone agrees with this but psychopathic tendencies are starting to get boring. And it's really hard to believe that he can upgrade his way of thinking if everything written is rudimentary. His lack of creativity with cell compatibility and lack of curiousity with natural energy mutations is also a factor. Anyway, the more the story progress, the more it begins to sound like a thesis. Almost no plot just data and failing dark humor. Naruto is entertaining because of the sense of adventure and mystery. This novel lacks them though so I think chapter 27 is my stop.
NOTE: There are more chapters in Fanfiction.net its the same author NOTE: There are more chapters in Fanfiction.net its the same author NOTE: There are more chapters in Fanfiction.net its the same author NOTE: There are more chapters in Fanfiction.net its the same author NOTE: There are more chapters in Fanfiction.net its the same author
I like this type of thorough story telling with pov changes and my favorite naruto character is Guy so this novel is pretty amazing to me. If I have to complain about something is that everything the mc does works or have little to no consequences in case of failure, that and the fact that he doesn't use the 8 gates.
I get that it's not fast paced but this is just to slow and character is like a workaholics mc only explanation for this "bird cage" & now where is Danzo don't tell me, Danzo can't even acknowledge Mc, in the root does he even exist? Talent is good enough to pick Danzo interest, overall it's solid .