Honestly it doesn't start out well. It's clear you are a new writer as the story gets better as it progresses. The updates have been stable and consistent since March/April. Writing quality starts out average for fics but get's better as the story progresses. The same can be said for character design, Isami. Aomi, and Orochimaru are well done compared to characters in the beginning of the fic. Chapter 61 is really well done and the fight scene embody's ninja-hood. Two people battling a superior opponent through trickery and planning tickles my fancy. I like your second fic, you should post it. Best of luck.