Review Detail of KissMyGloriousAxe in Rebirth In The Naruto-verse.

While I can't say this novel would be in my top ten- It's of decent quality when compared with many other works on this site. I rarely extend the effort to write reviews; but I'll try to give a list of pros/cons below so you can decide of it's for you. Pro's- Grammer/English Flows Well Not a Harem Power Creep is logically planned out and explained. No Character Bashing Explores the darker side of shinobi. Cons- A distinct lack of interactions with the Hyuga clan. I feel that they would try to be more active in his life; so far they're more a passive annoyance. The interactions with his mom are a bit unexpected and forced... She had completely ignored him in the beginning; then almost out of the blue changes her mind. I felt more effort could be made on his part to make allies. The MC has neglected potentially useful connections due to what could be. For example the utter disregard for Obito while teaching Rin struck me as odd... Considering how her death was the Catalyst for his debut as Tobi. It baffles me that he doesn't consider the possibility- That training Rin would completely butterfly things ensuring her survival...