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hay everyone, Blackraven here. i hope you all like my novel, and show it your support by giving it power stones, vote's review's. if you want to read more of my novel's then go and read Abyss Holder. hope you enjoy what you read.

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hello finally a novel with a balanced op character and nice story author I hope you explain the history of the world nexus our mc is in and I hope you make more good chapters in the future

The story itself is really good but this author keeps updating the same chapter multiple times and calling it "No Chapter" or "DNO". Basically, don't be fooled, this author doesn't update 7 times a week, they update about 2 times a week.

First of all as a cat lover I love this novel 😄 The author's narration is very impressive. The world in which the story takes place is described beautifully and the emotions of the characters are felt well. An interesting and exciting novel so far, I look forward to the next chapter. 👍

remove all of the locked chapters your book is good but not good enough for you to lock your chapters

I will say the premise is good. I also liked you didn't jump into the gun at the start like most other novels here do. I have not read the complete story or I caught up with it, but it has a lot of potentials. It can go anywhere

i like the idea, it is the same system story but with a twist. the start was interesting and i like the style of author. keep up the good work.

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Finished all the current chapters and and it can be considered good among the novels in this app. Personall, I think that the idea is good, if not great but the execution is a bit subpar. Idk if I am just used to systems who are monotone but I think that giving emotions to a system is a bad move. Generally, the characterization of the characters are also subpar. I suggest reading novels and comics to better improve and understand on how chracters of certain status act and the likes. The grammar could also use a lot of work so maybe considering hiring an editor if you have the capital. If not then at the very least google the word that you’re going to use or use quillbor/grammarly. I see a lor of potential in this story so keep up the work author and never be deterred by mistakes as we are human and we all make mistakes. As long as you can use the them in improving yourself then nothing is a problem.

Im enjoying the story, but posting “NO CHAPTER” and updating it later Is SO annoying!!!! Stop giving false hope for a chapter And forcing us to constantly recheck if its been Updated!! :(

I have not gotten too far into the story, but I already noticed a problem that needs immediate attention. spelling mistakes, a lot of words are just completely wrong or different from what the author is actually trying to say, make sure to proofread before posting or check the comments and fix the mistakes people are pointing out after, past that the story is good so far, keep it up.

too many grammatical mistakes. There's always a spelling mistake for every sentence, even the most basic one. You need to seriously fix it. The story is good, not too great but not too bad either.

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1st of all there is cat 5 stars 2nd Good story 3rd Finally, i found my third novel with cat or focused on cats. So all in all 5 stars

Well… In my honest opinion, it's ok at best. Mainly because the grammer ruins it too muchh, especially for something that you have to pay forr...

Good novel but lots of grammatical mistakes. I'm waiting a lot for the sequel. the humor is good and the plot is interesting. I recommend this novel if you are tired of always reading the same things.

I have throughly enjoyed reading up to chapter 21 so far as sadly that is all that is out right now can’t wait for more

this is an objective review from a reader, I tried avoiding my own biases as much as I could. The story has a very good start, the details about the mental state of the mc and the fact that he felt alive only while riding his bike all showed that the author was a mentally mature and a person who had been through some..things. but as the story goes on, it all becomes meaningless, the kitten is always angry against beings like gods who are actually helping him, Ungrateful. and he is always angry with the system too. but that's okay, a shut in lifestyle without much changes alongside for decades can give you personality issues, and I'll count that as one, but then, he is immortal, so he should atleast put some goals for himself to achieve with this eternal life, or what else is he alive for, for the sake of not dying?, relationship with other characters, no need to be mentioned, it's practically null... it's all just a pointless endeavour of going through the circle of life and ending up where he bagan, the mc was a person without goals or beliefs his first life, and the same was true for his second, what was the point of reincarnation and unique abilities if his mind can't evolve? try some philosophy books, that will add a soul to your story. I Truly hope it can become a story worth my time someday. with love, a fellow Webnovel writer, and, a reader.

I was initially attracted to this novel due to the synopsis, which sounded interesting enough. The prologue sequence also set a nice tone for what I thought was going to be an important development for the MC’s personality. However, I was sorely let down only a few chapters in. I can’t verify if the character returns to a fitting personality later, because I only got so far, but once the character reincarnates, he just has a large flip in personality and just starts acting ridiculous. Pair that with a noticeable lack of editing and sequences of letters and symbols that aren’t even English, but appear as though the author just gave up on the sentence, closed their eyes and pressed a few keys at random, I will not be reading further