Review Detail of GodJinh in

Finished all the current chapters and and it can be considered good among the novels in this app. Personall, I think that the idea is good, if not great but the execution is a bit subpar. Idk if I am just used to systems who are monotone but I think that giving emotions to a system is a bad move. Generally, the characterization of the characters are also subpar. I suggest reading novels and comics to better improve and understand on how chracters of certain status act and the likes. The grammar could also use a lot of work so maybe considering hiring an editor if you have the capital. If not then at the very least google the word that you’re going to use or use quillbor/grammarly. I see a lor of potential in this story so keep up the work author and never be deterred by mistakes as we are human and we all make mistakes. As long as you can use the them in improving yourself then nothing is a problem.