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this is an objective review from a reader, I tried avoiding my own biases as much as I could. The story has a very good start, the details about the mental state of the mc and the fact that he felt alive only while riding his bike all showed that the author was a mentally mature and a person who had been through some..things. but as the story goes on, it all becomes meaningless, the kitten is always angry against beings like gods who are actually helping him, Ungrateful. and he is always angry with the system too. but that's okay, a shut in lifestyle without much changes alongside for decades can give you personality issues, and I'll count that as one, but then, he is immortal, so he should atleast put some goals for himself to achieve with this eternal life, or what else is he alive for, for the sake of not dying?, relationship with other characters, no need to be mentioned, it's practically null... it's all just a pointless endeavour of going through the circle of life and ending up where he bagan, the mc was a person without goals or beliefs his first life, and the same was true for his second, what was the point of reincarnation and unique abilities if his mind can't evolve? try some philosophy books, that will add a soul to your story. I Truly hope it can become a story worth my time someday. with love, a fellow Webnovel writer, and, a reader.