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TheHermitKing
TheHermitKingLv141yrTheHermitKing

I was initially attracted to this novel due to the synopsis, which sounded interesting enough. The prologue sequence also set a nice tone for what I thought was going to be an important development for the MC’s personality. However, I was sorely let down only a few chapters in. I can’t verify if the character returns to a fitting personality later, because I only got so far, but once the character reincarnates, he just has a large flip in personality and just starts acting ridiculous. Pair that with a noticeable lack of editing and sequences of letters and symbols that aren’t even English, but appear as though the author just gave up on the sentence, closed their eyes and pressed a few keys at random, I will not be reading further

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BlackRaven_
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I see, thanks for the review, you are right about the lack of editing, I don't really have time to fix that, I barley have around 2 hours in a day to write in comparison to other writers because of work, however, I plan to fix them slowly and gradually.