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I feel that this has gotten off to a good start. The main character, as of the time of this writing, is a force of nature both figuratively and literally, as a lot of the events that have happened so far in the story revolve around him and also because he is incredibly overpowered. This is not necessarily a bad thing, as overpowered main characters can be done right (for example: Ainz Ooal Gown / Momonga from Overlord) as long as it is not their only defining feature, and they have interesting personalities, goals, motivations, and backstory. There is still much to be explored in this story in regards to the setting as well as the characters. So far, it has introduced the fact that this world has many human countries in it, one dwarven country, and that the rest of the races of this world are starting to establish themselves and form countries (the elves included thanks to the main character). There are a lot of details about the history of this world that could be explored in future chapters. All this being said, it is understandable as it appears that it is still in its exposition and therefor is still expanding upon the details about this world and its inhabitants. Overall, the story has been good so far, and I'm interested in how it explores the world of Nexus.