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Prime Originator
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Prime Originator

Pointbreak

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What is Prime Originator

Prime Originator is a popular web novel written by the author Pointbreak, covering REINCARNATION, HAREM, MATURE, CULTIVATION, ADVENTURE, ECCHI, ACTION, APOCALYPSE, WEAK-TO-STRONG, STEAMPUNK, Fantasy genres. It's viewed by 3.6M readers with an average rating of 4.43/5 and 137 reviews. The novel is being serialized to 392 chapters, new chapters will be published in Webnovel with all rights reserved.

Synopsis

In a world where strength reigns supreme and only the strong are revered, conflict and injuries are commonplace. The Divine Medicine King was a saintly doctor that saved the lives of many practitioners with his highly accomplished art of healing, garnering the respect of all, and becoming an existence not inferior to the other Divine Kings. As the son of the Divine Medicine King, Leon enjoyed the protective halo of his father and had very smooth sailing in life. However, everything came crashing down when the news of a peerless treasure in possession of his father with secrets of the everlasting was leaked. Greed was ignited, and gratitude was repaid with malice. Helpless to change the inevitable, both father and son lost their lives to their own subordinates under the schemes of the Divine Kings. When everything seemed to have come to an end, Leon was granted another chance, another life, and in another world foreign to the Divine Realm. Will he throw away everything and walk the path of the avenger, killing his way back into the Divine Realm to avenge his father? Or will he embrace his new life and forgoes the past? In the end, what lies at the end of the road of vengeance? When two seemingly separate yet intricately-linked worlds collide and calamity strikes, who will he save and who will he kill? This is a story of revenge. No, this a story of self-discovery. From a useless young master to a supreme being revered by all, Leon will unravel the mysteries of the world and become the one true creator. =====Author's Note===== This is my first time writing a novel. Please go easy on me. Feel free to join the discord for discussions about the novel, https://discord.gg/cxpRTCkzH9 =====DISCLAIMER===== The cover is not mine and belongs to its respective owner.

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TheUnseenMountTai
TheUnseenMountTaiLv4TheUnseenMountTai

Here we have another typical reincarnation novel, but who am I kidding you wouldn't be here, if you don't love them. MC: Smart MC, kind of evil since he got betrayed (logical) HAREM: Feels kind of forced at times (no he doesn't r*pe them), just that the relationships just... appear. BAMM New girlfriend. But this is only the case with the first two or three girls after which it gets a more natural feel WORLD: Can't say too much (would spoil some stuff if I did), but it's creative and has elements you don't see that often. CONCLUSION: Great novel I would highly recommend (and already have).

Falan_Filan
Falan_FilanLv3Falan_Filan

I think this is my second review premise of the story is very good world building is speacially intriguing leaves a lot to speculate also makes it flexible for author. Character interaction needs little improvment if there is one drawback that makes me regret its that there is no mature R-18 chapters for others it may not be drawback but when i see other fantasy cultivation novels emphesize on this have more popularity and rank it makes me sigh and its kinda late to add them other readers might not accept

Darkshadow12
Darkshadow12Lv4Darkshadow12

One of the good books I have read that has a good plot and some quality writing. Author has managed to create characters which seems to be pretty good. The plot gets interesting the more you read. The harem members are have different personalities whi is one of the most important factor. This novel has a good future if the author continues with the same quality of chapters.

Comrade_Weismann
Comrade_WeismannLv5Comrade_Weismann

Great work fellow daoist. As a fellow aithor I am really impressed with the ability of the author to write. There is a good balance in thia story, not too sweet, not too dark. I also like the MC's personality, who likes women but is not a spineless man who gets led around by a woman just because she is pretty. Over all I wish the updates keep coming, and i quote : Just like BooBs, may thay be everpresent and plenty!

Killerarrow007
Killerarrow007Lv4Killerarrow007

It's easily predicted and he got too comfy around and what about his father revenge he is not at all brooding and story is good but on the way it was beyond gone it's reunion is so idiotic

pataran
pataranLv5pataran

Mediocre writing, OK premise, 5 harem members by chapter 30, write your bad smut elsewhere, extremely disappointed. Why ruin a story with so many harem members?

leo26
leo26Lv4leo26

It's a good novel, has a simple plot which is easy to follow, Keep up the good work.........................................................

3KBytes
3KBytesLv63KBytes

I really don't feel like reading this story further. The mc is not likeable, story is full of cliches, and everything goes towards a completely obvious path, so no suspense on this story at all.

Wandurer
WandurerLv4Wandurer

Writing quality is top notch. But the character development/designs? I’d read this only because the storyline and writing is good. However, if it wasn’t for the weak and path—- females who turn useless the moment the mc appears. I’d have loved reading this, unfortunately the female personalities are all the same. upity noses, low to med level intelligence. Over all useless but only serve a purpose in upping the mc’s attractiveness. Is their only females in this series? Where are all the males? The ones who are at least intelligent and serve a purpose by either being frenemies or high class non-friend. they only serve to be pulped to embers or humiliated. And it’s like everywhere the mc goes there is always a female who fawns over the mc as soon as he appears or ‘accidentally’ or ‘unintentionally’ touches them in some way or another pumping up their Stupidity. however I have only reached around chapters 20-30 so who knows, fingers crossed.

Pointbreak
PointbreakAuthorPointbreak

Shameless Author supporting his own work and here to give some pros and cons with clarifications may or may not have been explained in the story. Cons -First time writing. Some grammatical mistakes and weird sentence structures are to be expected. English was my subject in school (Only passed with bare minimum grade. Yes, I almost failed.) -MC is not likable at the start. He is a typical spoil prince of a kingdom of medicine with no redeemable traits except for his medical knowledge. He only strives to become a better person after losing what is important and granted a second life, embracing the better half of himself from the new life and remembering his father's past teachings. -MC is not overpowered from start. He raised his cultivation through pills in his past life. As a prince, he never needed to fight other people himself. His only battle experience comes hunting beasts. It's a gradual weak to strong process. -Harem. Some people like it, some people don't. It's just a matter of preference. However, I do admit I had lost control of the pacing and introduced too many females in the early parts of the story. I'm new to writing but I am learning and improving as I go. Take it as you will. -Cliches and some cringy scenes in the early parts of the story. If you can get past them, then I wish you an enjoyable read. If you can't, I wish you a pleasant journey on finding better novels to read as a fellow reader. Pros -Hmm... good world-building? Good comedy? I'm not really sure. Never really been a confident person to point out what's good about my story, but people seem to be enjoying it. I guess you just have to read to find out the pros and help me with this :P I probably dragged all your expectations down with all the cons listed by now, so if you still manage to read and it turns out better than you had expected, then all that is left are surprises, right? You can't be disappointed if you have no expectations xD I remember that being my mentality when receiving my test results way back in high school. Them passing grades for English were the best feeling. Anyway, don't take the story too seriously. If you also enjoy it like the others and crack a good laugh while immersing yourself in the world of Gaia then all is well. Happy reading!

Jack_Priper
Jack_PriperLv6Jack_Priper

It's actually fine if you want to combine all the regular cliches and what not. But could you at least think it out? This could have been much better.

Suirenn
SuirennLv5Suirenn

this novel is good and honestly it can stand alone without the harem tag. the harem tag just killed this novel for me.. pity because its quite good. coiling dragon and I shall seal the heavens were both gems and they were able to stand on their own without the harem tag but novel just killed it for me. its quite unrealistic how the girls in this novel behaves. its like they flush down their brain in a toilet or something. they all seem like animals on heat whose main purpose in life is to copulate with the mc. where the f is their self respect, common sense, pride, dignity..😒 real people dont behave that way. they're just like bunch of flowers whose only main purpose is too highlight how overpowered and chick the magnet the mc is..😩

MDS435
MDS435Lv7MDS435

Well written, the MC is likeable and easily relatable. There is good use of imagery and good ole face slapping. What would a cultivation novel be without face slapping. Also has harem.

Gaurav_Kumar_2681
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HungryCat
HungryCatLv5HungryCat

Really like the story, the first ~50 chapters really had me infuriated for the main character but I stuck around because I enjoyed the premise.... And I'm glad I did!

niazhasnat
niazhasnatLv5niazhasnat

One of the very few books that I think has a good and simple plot . Although the release rate is super slow I still haven't stopped reading for this one reason . Keep up the good work .❤️

Slalloy
SlalloyLv5Slalloy

Новелла получилась откровенно постороенной на штампах, и театре абсурда. Герой совершенно не соответствует прописанной ему же биографии, течение самой истории в точности соответствует главному герою оно неравномерное и населено огромным количеством сюжетных дыр и несостыковок, во много очень сильно чувствуется неопытность автора и ближе к 120 главам он достиг своего потолка и острота его пера не сильно растет, в тоже время я забросил эту историю. Резюме не тратьте свое время зря ищите другую историю

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