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TheAmbrosiusLv152yr
2023-01-28 23:34

I don't know if you'll read this author, but seeing how you're slowly getting back into writing again despite your health problems I wanted to create an up-to-date review. If it meets your standards maybe pin it up on the top. Without further ado, let's get into the review... WRITING QUALITY: -It's been quite a while since I read the early chapters so I won't comment on those however later chapters for sure show the quality that we want in Webnovel authors. This is especially true compared with many newbies who either have English as their second language or just mediocre grammar in general. Regardless you can be assured of the quality of this work. STABILITY OF UPDATES: -I remember in the beginning the author kept a consistent schedule with some brief slowdowns here and there. About 7 months ago he was producing at least 2 a day which lead to burnout plus health problems to contend with leading to a long hiatus. -Now I've noticed him updating again slowly since health problems still persist. I score this 5/5 because looking at the novel as a whole the author has shown a consistent effort in updating which only stopped because of health problems. STORY DEVELOPMENT: -This has become one of my favorite stories of all time up till now. Like most novels in this genre, you start off with a small kingdom that's a part of a larger continent even larger world, and a vast universe. If done right it makes you want to come back for more. -What this novel also does is focus on the MC of course while showing briefly other characters progressing the story plot which adds complexity to the MCs actions as a whole instead of isolation. -The MC is reincarnated so the connections made throughout make the story make everything more depth. I see the potential for this to be 3000+ in chapters if the author's health can recover. CHARACTERS DESIGN: -The MC is a complex character thanks to his background as a Divine Docter, son of the Medicine King, and a mysterious mom that has been mentioned only briefly alluding to interesting implications. Fast forward to his present life, he still uses those skills however, in order to get his revenge he must become a warrior. Overall most people will like his personality and choices seeing how he can be both ruthless and empathetic. I don't care for cold-blooded MCs so don't expect that in this novel. -This is a harem novel which means many people are already choosing not to read. Fair enough if you're still considering reading this then know the number of women is more than 3 and less than 10 so far. I don't see the MC creating a vast harem even if many people feel he expanded too fast too early. As of the present he is consolidating the connections made while not actively searching for more members because the author has left open loops with other harem potentials. -Family is involved which adds to the MCs personality, gives you different perspectives on current events, and expands the possible story plots going forward. WORLD BACKGROUND: -Very rich, complex, and interesting. We have the MC's background which is a different realm and his present-day life which is in a different realm. History that goes back far and the connections between events leading up to now help the characters and story progress. Overall I can't recommend this novel enough even though the update rate is still questionable. I have left this in one of my reading lists waiting for the day he updates again which he has. So stop reading this and start reading the novel!

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Hey author I noticed this novels status changed to “Completed” and your Witch System novel is updated. Is this novel done with for good?

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It’s not complete. Something is wrong with the app. It’s still set to “paused” in my inkstone workspace page. So don’t fret, this story is something I have to complete at some point since it’s the foundation for all novels sharing the same universe🙏🙇🏻‍♂️

TheAmbrosius:Hey author I noticed this novels status changed to “Completed” and your Witch System novel is updated. Is this novel done with for good?
TheAmbrosiusLv15

Glad to hear it.

Pointbreak:It’s not complete. Something is wrong with the app. It’s still set to “paused” in my inkstone workspace page. So don’t fret, this story is something I have to complete at some point since it’s the foundation for all novels sharing the same universe🙏🙇🏻‍♂️
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