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Pointbreak
PointbreakAuthor4yr
2020-12-07 09:19

Hello you, yes, you, the lost and curious reader. I see you have stumbled upon my unholy sanctuary in search of something fun and interesting to read. I cannot say the early chapters are my best work, but it is my first book so do give it a try if you are willing to give this book a chance and allow me to entertain you.

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JimmyBlah
JimmyBlahLv14

1. Why have I not heard of this yet. 2. That synopsis was sęxy asf, thank you for the eye-gasm. 3. I see we have a gura fan

JimmyBlah
JimmyBlahLv14

edit: just realized that isn’t gura in your bio

JimmyBlah:1. Why have I not heard of this yet. 2. That synopsis was sęxy asf, thank you for the eye-gasm. 3. I see we have a gura fan
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Pointbreak
PointbreakAuthor

No... it is just me. sorry to disappoint👀

JimmyBlah:edit: just realized that isn’t gura in your bio
Pointbreak
PointbreakAuthor

Thank you for the praise😬 Maybe you haven’t heard of this story because I am unreliable with updates and dont get big features, so it is usually off the radar and in the trash somewhere, waiting for people to pick it out😭

JimmyBlah:1. Why have I not heard of this yet. 2. That synopsis was sęxy asf, thank you for the eye-gasm. 3. I see we have a gura fan
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JimmyBlah
JimmyBlahLv14

You’ll make it eventually, don’t give up hope! 💪🏼

Pointbreak
PointbreakAuthor

Thankyou🙏

JimmyBlah:You’ll make it eventually, don’t give up hope! 💪🏼
Thesoultaker88
Thesoultaker88Lv5

author i wan't to ask some questions before i start reading and those are 1)will there be drama with mc harem 2)will mc love his harem 3) will mc care for them and last 4)will the harem of mc follow him(and not be like all the cultivation novels/manhua where the harem is left behind for the next 50-100 chapters)

Pointbreak
PointbreakAuthor

There’s little drama between one hArem member and mc but no drama between harem members. Mc has will one main love interest but he Will can for harem memBers with equal love. And yes, they will follow Mc. MC wont leave them behind when he travel to new worlds and realms

Thesoultaker88:author i wan't to ask some questions before i start reading and those are 1)will there be drama with mc harem 2)will mc love his harem 3) will mc care for them and last 4)will the harem of mc follow him(and not be like all the cultivation novels/manhua where the harem is left behind for the next 50-100 chapters)
jmori2010
jmori2010Lv15

if it's any comfort, although I haven't actually read it yet, I've had your novel in my collection back when it only had 40~50ish chapters... I liked the original synopsis where he ignores his childhood sweetheart and falls into deprivity only to lose it all... 👍

Pointbreak:Thank you for the praise😬 Maybe you haven’t heard of this story because I am unreliable with updates and dont get big features, so it is usually off the radar and in the trash somewhere, waiting for people to pick it out😭
Crazy_Cronie_1
Crazy_Cronie_1Lv5

yo author-san, is it polygamy? I mean does mc takes girls or onyl goes for one when there is aa entire harem chasing him?

Pointbreak:No... it is just me. sorry to disappoint👀
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Pointbreak
PointbreakAuthor

Polygamy, yes. MC will have multiple wives👀

Crazy_Cronie_1:yo author-san, is it polygamy? I mean does mc takes girls or onyl goes for one when there is aa entire harem chasing him?
Crazy_Cronie_1
Crazy_Cronie_1Lv5

alright! thanks point-san 🌚... gonna read this then 🍻

Pointbreak:Polygamy, yes. MC will have multiple wives👀
Vwarrior
VwarriorLv15

Author fan of your book,I love this book. good job keep it up👍👍👍 But I have only one concern and that is with Harem. Don't try to increase the number too much and mostly concentrate on developing the charecters of female leads. In most of the Harem novels I read on this site. The Harem generally goes like this MC will have tens of lovers/wifes and by the end they all will become one dimensional character who love MC unconditionally without any proper reason and as a reault readers like me would get disappointed with the novel as a whole. Atleast in this novel you have given nice back stories and personalities to female leads but if you try to add a new Harem member in every arc it would only ruin the character development in long run. So please prioritize in quality rather than quantity

Pointbreak
PointbreakAuthor

Thank you for enjoying My story🙏☺️ I also know the story is rather shaky due to the introduction of lots of female characters in the early chapters😅 I’m not sure where you are currently up to but it has slowed down a lot on the harem with only four official lovers at the latest cha**🥺

Vwarrior:Author fan of your book,I love this book. good job keep it up👍👍👍 But I have only one concern and that is with Harem. Don't try to increase the number too much and mostly concentrate on developing the charecters of female leads. In most of the Harem novels I read on this site. The Harem generally goes like this MC will have tens of lovers/wifes and by the end they all will become one dimensional character who love MC unconditionally without any proper reason and as a reault readers like me would get disappointed with the novel as a whole. Atleast in this novel you have given nice back stories and personalities to female leads but if you try to add a new Harem member in every arc it would only ruin the character development in long run. So please prioritize in quality rather than quantity
KeNNzor
KeNNzorLv10

Author, quick question before I start reading. I understood that your early chapters aren't the best and the comments can confirm that unfortunately. What I wanna know is if it truly gets better? I really dislike full on cliche novels or where the story consistency is all over the place. Just wanna make sure that eventually the pieces get in their place and the MC starts acting like he should, and if so would u know around what chapter this happens. I wanna have an idea about when I should look for a change in style

Pointbreak
PointbreakAuthor

I would say around mid to end of volume 2 that things starts to pick up, but if you make it past 30chaps without laughing once, you dont have to force yourself to enjoy the story. although i do hope that you do get to enjoy reading the story

KeNNzor:Author, quick question before I start reading. I understood that your early chapters aren't the best and the comments can confirm that unfortunately. What I wanna know is if it truly gets better? I really dislike full on cliche novels or where the story consistency is all over the place. Just wanna make sure that eventually the pieces get in their place and the MC starts acting like he should, and if so would u know around what chapter this happens. I wanna have an idea about when I should look for a change in style
Husan
HusanLv3

this book also had harem

Pointbreak
PointbreakAuthor

Yes harem

Husan:this book also had harem
Cloudelka
CloudelkaLv12

Who is in the harem ?

Pointbreak:Yes harem
Aquadiver
AquadiverModerator

My kind of book

Pointbreak:Polygamy, yes. MC will have multiple wives👀
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