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Pointbreak
PointbreakAuthor4yr
2020-08-07 04:05

Shameless Author supporting his own work and here to give some pros and cons with clarifications may or may not have been explained in the story. Cons -First time writing. Some grammatical mistakes and weird sentence structures are to be expected. English was my subject in school (Only passed with bare minimum grade. Yes, I almost failed.) -MC is not likable at the start. He is a typical spoil prince of a kingdom of medicine with no redeemable traits except for his medical knowledge. He only strives to become a better person after losing what is important and granted a second life, embracing the better half of himself from the new life and remembering his father's past teachings. -MC is not overpowered from start. He raised his cultivation through pills in his past life. As a prince, he never needed to fight other people himself. His only battle experience comes hunting beasts. It's a gradual weak to strong process. -Harem. Some people like it, some people don't. It's just a matter of preference. However, I do admit I had lost control of the pacing and introduced too many females in the early parts of the story. I'm new to writing but I am learning and improving as I go. Take it as you will. -Cliches and some cringy scenes in the early parts of the story. If you can get past them, then I wish you an enjoyable read. If you can't, I wish you a pleasant journey on finding better novels to read as a fellow reader. Pros -Hmm... good world-building? Good comedy? I'm not really sure. Never really been a confident person to point out what's good about my story, but people seem to be enjoying it. I guess you just have to read to find out the pros and help me with this :P I probably dragged all your expectations down with all the cons listed by now, so if you still manage to read and it turns out better than you had expected, then all that is left are surprises, right? You can't be disappointed if you have no expectations xD I remember that being my mentality when receiving my test results way back in high school. Them passing grades for English were the best feeling. Anyway, don't take the story too seriously. If you also enjoy it like the others and crack a good laugh while immersing yourself in the world of Gaia then all is well. Happy reading!

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MrFalan
MrFalanLv14

R18 ?

Pointbreak
PointbreakAuthor

Yes馃樁

MrFalan:R18 ?
PPR_P
PPR_PLv3

yes

Aneska
AneskaLv5

I'm only on chapter 13 and I've noticed that you don't describe the peoples height/body/hair color/hair length almost at all and was wondering if that changed later?

Pointbreak
PointbreakAuthor

I鈥檝e actually avoided describing their appearances in details because I forgot to record them down for reference and ended up forgetting how I described them with my goldfish memory. But yeah there are some description for time to time but not in great detail馃槄 Sorry about that

Aneska:I'm only on chapter 13 and I've noticed that you don't describe the peoples height/body/hair color/hair length almost at all and was wondering if that changed later?
Pointbreak
PointbreakAuthor

Just a side note that a lot of women might have been introduced early in the story but even after 320chapters, Leon only has intimate relationship with 2 of them and engaged to a 3rd one馃槸

Ero_Sage
Ero_SageLv11

How many overall? (Till ch 1000)

Pointbreak:Just a side note that a lot of women might have been introduced early in the story but even after 320chapters, Leon only has intimate relationship with 2 of them and engaged to a 3rd one馃槸
Pointbreak
PointbreakAuthor

Presently 5

Ero_Sage:How many overall? (Till ch 1000)
Ero_Sage
Ero_SageLv11

Well, okay, ig. Have you reduced the number because of the complaints?

Pointbreak:Presently 5
Pointbreak
PointbreakAuthor

No, there鈥檚 still more love interests that have yet to enter the harem

Ero_Sage:Well, okay, ig. Have you reduced the number because of the complaints?
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