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2021-07-06 16:05

Writing quality is good. The story is good. Worldbuilding is very unique. Mc character is likeable. harm was a little bit shakey in the begning but things get natural afterwards. every place mc goes has people has their cultivation system which is different from other places. mc is not evil-hearted by nature but still kill villains. for me, this story is better than a few in the top 20. keep up the good work author and plz don't drop this story

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Thank you for taking your time to write a review! It’s been so long since I got one!😭🙏🙇🏻‍♂️

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Pointbreak:Thank you for taking your time to write a review! It’s been so long since I got one!😭🙏🙇🏻‍♂️
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