KayLillyt_1
It had been a while since I read a story without any magic, superpowers and whatnot. It's a nice story, really reminded me of the things so many people struggle with in their lives. I liked how the first chapter started. There is a balanced ratio of character development to world development. My favourite character would be Peggy, just her name is intriguing enough to me. Definitely recommend this to romance readers out there, give this story a chance. The characters are realistic and the scenes vivid. My only complaint about this story is well... the author's use of grammar and punctuation. It is a little incorrect. The tenses don't match the form, some periods are used in place of commas. This needs a couple of hours of proofreading. The prose is something I like, though. Great job, do keep on writing!
The writing makes for very interesting narration that gets my attention. The updates seem to be consistent and the story is developed well. The characters are good, but I would like to see more description about what they look like. I'd also like more description about what the environment looks like.
I gave everything a five star review, but the stability of updates is kinda poor. BUTT I just can't wait for the next chapter. I added this to library! I love your style. This definitely deserves more attention. I would recommend adding the tags, that could help increasing the rate of views. You're a great author, keep it up!!
The authors writing style is great! I haven't read all the chapters yet, but I have taken a liking to It already. I will recommend it to anyone on this platform. I think this novel deserves more attention, maybe it's being betrayed by the cover, that's something the author will have to consider. My concern is the updating stability; it would have been better if the author could release more frequently, but who knows? Sometimes quality is better than quantity.