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FireEngine1yrReplied to DAMM_SCHOOL- FireEngine1yrReplied to valient_vicky
- FireEngine1yrReplied to NebuIa
Ye, thanks for the long review. I'm not even mad, just happy that people are invested in this s.h.i.t (censored word). But you know, what is written is written. It can't be changed now. To be honest, this novel was written for a limited-format story prompt in a contest (you can tell it lacks necessary character depth and worldbuilding). In this sense, it's been a device of learning for myself. I admit that there are definitely some d.a.m.ning flaws overall (especially that of the mc who is apparently playing this novel on easy mode, getting b.i.t.c.h.e.s left and right). But this novel was primarily written to entertain a h.o.r.n.y bunch, so I lowered my own standards. (You may not like it, but I considered this entire book a joke until chapter 50). I myself am surprised by the moderately engaging plot I managed to draw here. Most r-18 focused novels don't even try this. Also, I'll be pleased if you found the s.m.u.t scenes enjoyable (I did actual research for those lol. #ResearchPurposes came true). With that said, I'll try my best to improve the various aspects lacking in this book, by which you may find worth it reading the upcoming chapters. You know, I've done some good system building while incorporating the power of h.o.r.n.y here. (Totally not proud though). But it can assure you of my current attitude about this novel. I'm serious (I hope you don't diss it too much). Also, apologies for the infrequent updates these days. I'm suffering from severe depression and irl problems (it's real, I guess... heh). Don't worry, I can cope. The update rates will be back on track soon. - Chillax mate, FireEngine.
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- FireEngine1yrReplied to Thaddeus_Thompkins
oh wait, I meant his 'own' son. Let me correct this typo
This paragraph has been deleted. - FireEngine1yrReplied to LoganLawson03Ch 170 170. Fierce Battle on the 72nd Floor [1]
- FireEngine1yrReplied to KhingOfPages
It's real!
The girl on the left was a busty beauty who caught his gaze for a long time. Wearing a dark revealing one piece with a cut between her breasts, she pressed her upper body on him while blushing. - FireEngine1yrReplied to Larry_Sweeper
Haha, you wanna see the mc make her pregnant, don't you?
''Hmph,'' Ruxa couldn't control her jealousy any longer and sat on her master's right thigh, beginning to kiss him. Perry was calm even while hearing the slurping sounds. - FireEngine1yrReplied to kristian_hammond
that's Yunna
''I was a human raised in a small village of Gaephia province. Until my early twenties, I remained in that village as a married woman. Yes, I had a husband and a kid as well,'' Erin paused there and chuckled. - FireEngine1yrReplied to Necronomikus
Yes, that feature will be coming soon đ
For any normal human, they would need more than a month to reach the 66th floor from the 1st floor. That's how big Jake's dungeon was now. - FireEngine1yrReplied to Tristan_Morgen1234
Jake is in complete control
''There is a tributary ahead. That's also where Karsuda Province's territory ends,'' Ruxa said. ''Then we will enter the Ardin Province!'' - FireEngine1yrReplied to Necronomikus
yes
So now, dungeon building and collecting millions of Evil Points were his choices. He had a lot of things, like monsters, bloodlines and items to buy from the system. - FireEngine1yrReplied to JimmmbobCh 153 153. Entering the Moonlight Forest
- FireEngine1yrReplied to Davevw
That's not me, that's the fking mc. Blame him for the terrible cover story, I'm innocent! đ©
However, your friends are trapped in a room, and only an enormous amount of mana crystals can open the door to it. You've confirmed the priestess and the boy are also here, but they aren't dead because of a mysterious jar which secretes live-saving elixir. How is it? Can you tell your adventurer friends about it?'' - FireEngine1yrReplied to Man_Kan
- FireEngine1yrReplied to Man_Kan
I'm really sorry. I hope there were no kids around. (I've specially warned in the synopsis, and there is a mature rating added as well.) It's an app-wide library feature (The book temporarily appears on every reader's library). Neither the readers nor the writers have control over it. THE READERS DO NOT ADD IT THEMSELVES. Such covers are required to pull the specific type of readerbase for this book, sorry for that. Also, I can see from here (reader statistics) that you haven't read this book in any given time. So if you need to explain further, please show this reply to your family members. Peace.
- FireEngine1yrReplied to HutchTheWolf
They only have the shape, or build of a horse. There is no horse half (so no hair or hide, it's human skin), as I've described in this chapter. And yea, uh... you might want to skip a couple chapters ahead if it's still unsettling. I mean, it's pretty clear where this is heading.
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