Review Detail of FireEngine in Possibly So

It had been a while since I read a story without any magic, superpowers and whatnot. It's a nice story, really reminded me of the things so many people struggle with in their lives. I liked how the first chapter started. There is a balanced ratio of character development to world development. My favourite character would be Peggy, just her name is intriguing enough to me. Definitely recommend this to romance readers out there, give this story a chance. The characters are realistic and the scenes vivid. My only complaint about this story is well... the author's use of grammar and punctuation. It is a little incorrect. The tenses don't match the form, some periods are used in place of commas. This needs a couple of hours of proofreading. The prose is something I like, though. Great job, do keep on writing!