Review Detail of Brian_Hanes_117 in Possibly So

Item: Possibly So
Rating: 4.4

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Brian_Hanes_117Lv12yrBrian_Hanes_117

The writing makes for very interesting narration that gets my attention. The updates seem to be consistent and the story is developed well. The characters are good, but I would like to see more description about what they look like. I'd also like more description about what the environment looks like.

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KayLillyt_1

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Brian_Hanes_117Lv1Brian_Hanes_117

The grammar is ok, but there are several mistakes scattered throughout. It would be good for the author to go back and edit the story to clean that up. It's still a great story though.

2yr