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With a heavy heart, I had to republish my novel with a new link, though the name 'The Demon in a Beauty', will be same. It look me an year to reach at such reach, and I had to start over again. Your support there, can help me a lot. Adding it to your library, comments, review and by voting. Hope to see you theređ¤đ¤
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Well-made. novel. Little to no writing errors The plot progresses smoothly And just me being honest here, but I don't like romance-related novels. They just feel cringy. However, this novel still have be grasped onto it. Still haven't read the full thing. going to finish it off now. Keep up the great work author!!
Amazing concept, and the story provides you a very emotional way to start up the adventure. The way that the sadness occurs in the part brings out the novel, with the progressing character developments for the cherry on top. The advises that I can give you as a fellow author is to never stop editting! There are grammatical errors, but that doesn't mean that the story is not good. Another thing that I want to point out is the way that the story advances. It will be more eye catching if the plot of the story engages into a different act by means of amplifying it. Let's for an, example, instead of saying "9 months later" a better approach could be "Nothing had happened during the past few months. Xau xau had only been etc etc" and the story goes on. It depends on you, the author, on how will you write these sequences, based from your style. Nevertheless, your book is awesome and good luck with your novel~!
Really a nice book. Lovely start, painful in a way though but then again its what draws you in. I could feel the bond of the twin siblings even though I am not one myself but as a writer of a twin story... Wow, you did good. Nice family bond. I love the fact that she could come out of her weakness and give life another chance. Cool book.
Lovely story!đ⨠I love the way the author tells the story, really draws the reader in to feel what the characters are going through. The snippets of memories and dreams that the FL has from time to time makes me want to know why, where or when it happened. The suspense is amazing.⨠There is so much going on in the novel and the author was able to pull it off (even with how she says she isn't good at writing đ¤) You're an awesome writer and for your first novel, you really did an amazing jobđâ¨đ I hope you keep on writing đ. In my library đ
This story starts in a dramatic and emotional way. It provides a good hook for those looking for an emotionally charged story. It seems to start a little slowly, introducing the characters and allowing the reader to get to know them. I like how pretty early on we see the main character working to strengthen herself. The characters, the concept, and the story seem sound and fairly well thought out, but unfortunately the writing needs polish. There are a lot of grammatical errors, spelling issues, and words used incorrectly. I also noticed that sometimes the character's full name was used, other times it was a nickname. It was inconsistent and confusing until you get to know the characters better.
It has a good emotional start that was able to grab my attention. By the way I see it, this novel has an interesting plot. I can easily portray what the author wants me to portray such as the scenarios and the looks of the characters. It may be a bit slow-paced but that is fine with me. I truly enjoyed reading the first five chapters of this novel and perhaps when I have some spare time I will read further. Stability of Updates is also an automatic five for me since I prefer quality over quantity. Great work author and good luck!
