Review Detail of MS_Chavez in Novel replaced.

This story starts in a dramatic and emotional way. It provides a good hook for those looking for an emotionally charged story. It seems to start a little slowly, introducing the characters and allowing the reader to get to know them. I like how pretty early on we see the main character working to strengthen herself. The characters, the concept, and the story seem sound and fairly well thought out, but unfortunately the writing needs polish. There are a lot of grammatical errors, spelling issues, and words used incorrectly. I also noticed that sometimes the character's full name was used, other times it was a nickname. It was inconsistent and confusing until you get to know the characters better.