Reviews of NonPlayer

Okay, I have just read it but this is amazing. There is a suspense that makes me attracted to the story and not only that but the way the author explains things is amazing as well! I totally recommend this novel who likes serious stuff. Good luck author ^^

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Gotta say, this ML book is a masterpiece on Webnovel and the Author's writing style and grip on his words is spectacular which automatically makes the story interesting to the readers~ Writing Quality: As I said, pretty good since I couldn't spot any large grammatical error. But everyone has space to improve, so for now 5/5. Development: Since I've only read top 10 chapters, all I can say is that its going smoothly and the MC is experienced and realistic because of his past and everything. 5/5~ Updates: Since the last chapter was updated 5 months ago, can't say much but if the Author starts updating again then pretty good too 😅 All in all, great job Author! 😄🎊

Whoa! This story seems interesting judging by the prologue and the first chapter. Definitely adding this to my reading list! Keep it up, Author!

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OMG! this novel is amazing! I love how the author made the players the bad guys. keep it up, author!!

I don't know much about system novels, but with what I have read so far, this by far is my favorite!! The background, characters, and storyline suck you into their world, making you follow along with every running step. Read the first chapter, and you won't be able to stop! Very unique and well written, fantastic job well done! 👏 🤩

Few chaps into the book and I found myself already embedded into the story, its readability was that good. it has a not to slow character development and its world background is well thought out.

This is worthy to read. Good description and flow of the plot. I like how you made the earth a gaming ground. Nice story. Well done, author. More Chapters.

A gaming type of story. I enjoyed it. Even though its only a few chapters, i can see the potential in the story. There are a few grammar mistakes but those can be fixed. I like how quick and easy the story is to read and not to heavy. its a great start. keep it up

Go Abyss dragon Go! There's not much yet, but I hope the author can continue writing and expand on the world and the characters in it. GG WP

With only one chapter, this novel is quite intriguing. The amount of dialogue is something unique, yet it doesn't overwhelm and the system and quest are introduced very well at the end of the first chapter. Be sure to give this one a read.

I love this book, it's a fun read! The grammar and pacing allow you to stay in the story and not be distracted by writing flaws while the worldbuilding does it's thing and drags you into it's depths, taking you hostage as you beg for another chapter to be released!

I like it. It has good story building, drama, intensity, and I actually like the MC so far.Keep it up.

10/10 definitely recommend you read it!

Great first chapter + prologue. It’ clear the writer here has an amazing plot to flesh out. Can’t to read it all.

Couldn't stop reading this amazing piece of work, ever chapter left me hooked in suspense. World building and character personalization is amazing work done, keep up the great work author