Evelyn_Wiles
I am an avid Sci-Fi reader. I prefer an upbeat, save the day kind of MC, but as long as a story is riveting and interesting, I'm willing to give it a read. Especially if you include novel concepts.
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Evelyn_Wiles1mthReplied to Chu_papiHmm. OK. That makes it sound more reasonable. Thanks.
A thick smile formed on Jin-Woo's lips.- Evelyn_Wiles1mthCommented
Well, if you shoot for average, that's what you'll get. If your aim is fairness in gaming, while picking your stats, you've broken your character and your purpose in playing.
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So perception... i.e. evil rumor mongers can steal your good karma by spreading lies about you?
"Not exactly. Every person has a maximum of a hundred Karma from the moment they are born, but the number decreases when you do bad deeds to others or if people see you in a bad light." - Evelyn_Wiles1mthReplied to Evelyn_Wiles
*motivational
"So you didn't save us. You're simply transporting us?" Alicia's voice held a hint of disappointment, her lips forming a small frown. - Evelyn_Wiles1mthReplied to Magecrafter
Sorry, but it isn't coming across as a moti action issue. They were saved, regardless of the motivation or method of saving. The term you're looking for is altruism. So, you didn't save us out of the graciousness of your heart. You had an ulterior motive.
"So you didn't save us. You're simply transporting us?" Alicia's voice held a hint of disappointment, her lips forming a small frown. - Evelyn_Wiles1mthReplied to Evelyn_Wiles
*how
Not to mention, he had no idea what effect his body fluids or semen might have on her. It might not do anything or it might be like that one Spiderman comic where he killed MJ due to his radioactive sperm. - Evelyn_Wiles1mthReplied to Amatsu
True. But, though it isn't my cup of tea, that doesn't men it isn't a well written story that actually has a storyline. I've seen enough horror that has no storyline at all.
detailArrival of the Alternate World: My Identity as the Holy Emperor Got Exposed by My DaughterUrban · Dark Dot - Evelyn_Wiles2mthCommented
sea or ocean floor
As the naga took his last breathe, the nearby fishmen saw Cipher and surged towards him, their eyes ablaze with madness. Cipher didn't waste any time and kicked the deceased Naga's blade into the air, catching it before slashing down the advancing enemies. And in seconds, the fishmen dropped into the ground. - Evelyn_Wiles3mthReplied to Saphartlantis
Ha ha. Spellchecker strikes again.
Scarface was fuming. It was clear that the White Scarfs were bullying them with bigger numbers and yet the guy was shameless enough to suggest this was goodwill. Nevertheless, Death Associates was at a disadvantage. Trying to force the issue would just bring them harm. Hence, he clenched his teeth and gave his members the sign to retreat. - Evelyn_Wiles3mthCommented
Isn't that vampires?Your book though.
He walked straight to the mirror, and though he knew this was a bad idea he still stood before the mirror. - Evelyn_Wiles3mthCommented
dystrophya disorder in which an organ or tissue of the body wastes away."myotonic dystrophy"antonyms for degeneration:rehabilitationenhancementimprovementevolutionprogressrecoveryadvancementdecencyhumblenessadvancedevelopmentforward movementgrowthrallyrecuperationriseameliorationascentbenefitbettermentbig step forwardchange for the bettercomebackexpansionfurtherance
Meanwhile, on a vast road, one could see a flat brow hair boy that is about four feet off the ground, it had no special dystrophy, just the slim body of a sixteen close to seventeen years old body, standing in the center of the road while looking around the environment he found himself on. - Evelyn_Wiles3mthCommented
sipping?how about:suckingpuffingsmokingdragging (less commonly known to non-smokers)
Meanwhile, the boss stayed behind still sipping on his cigarette, and then looked straight at the meteorite. - Evelyn_Wiles3mthCommented
mother and brother
Nate's life had been a little bit better for him since he lost his parents to a family fight that led to his dad killing his mother and father, However, in the end, things changed and his father killed himself out of panic about facing the Justice of what he had done. - Evelyn_Wiles3mthCommentedCh 11 Battling the Blood.
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a period -> prayed
It is true that a few minutes ago, he had a period for a worthy opponent to show up, but the rad dog standing in front of him was giving off a strange vibe that was not sitting well with Nate. - Evelyn_Wiles3mthCommented
Muscular dystrophy is a degenerative disease. You need another term here, because you've described him as quite muscular.- A hereditary condition marked by progressive weakening and wasting of the muscles.
In his previous life, he had not been gyming but had fighting skills, but in the game, he has muscular dystrophy but does not have the fighting skills to back it up. - Evelyn_Wiles3mthCommented
He she,boy girl...which is it?
It was already clear to Kai that Mia knew something that she wasn't saying. - Evelyn_Wiles3mthCommented
And on this paragraph, sold?
There was no need to knock since it was just a shop that sealed clothes. - Evelyn_Wiles3mthCommented
Do you mean seller or salesman?
There was no need to knock since it was just a shop that sealed clothes.