Yea becoming complacent is always dangerous

It’s okay, if you ever get to her growth arc you’ll find out how wholesome she is even more

It is Ty's girlfriend, This is from Erebos Perspective.

6”2 roughly,

Anytime he uses a soul he takes on charactistics on that persons soul for a short time before reverting back.

Sasuke Mode

Yea it’s a great novel and was my first book where the hero’s failed and the villain won. 3 book trilogy, will be a great series, it’s also an audible book if you never have time for paperback

No I appreciate it, I’m still learning how to write and pace myself, so it’s a learning experience putting my thoughts and ideas onto paper, One of the main reasons I began writing on WebNovel is so I can become a better writer than ver time with real feedback so I can maybe one day pursue traditional publishing. I get a lot of motivation from writers like Brandon Sanderson and his power systems he created. I will give the wisp a look as well, I love a good novel, but if you haven’t read any Brandon Sanderson novels I highly suggest the mistborn trilogy, I took some inspiration from the FL of that novel.

Yea, I bet it’s frustrating, I never knew some of these issues were even in the story. So I do appreciate you pointing these out as you read them. This is my first time dedicating so much energy to a story, so I do apologize for the mistakes along the way.

I went ahead and added the extra paragraphs that were needed, I never even knew it got missed when I uploaded them. Thanks and sorry to ruin your reading experience

Ty ended up lodged in the mountainside after the intense encounter with the dark-cloaked man. After being hit with the massive purple bolt of lightning and crashing into the flat-bottomed land by the six pillars, he eventually propelled himself into the sky with his black flames, seeking distance from Thunderclap. However, the fatigue and disorientation from using his abilities caused him to pass out, and he crashed into the side of a snow-covered mountain, where he remained until he regained consciousness.

He has a starting goal for where he wants to go and above all else that's getting back home to his girl, She is in fact the FL who will have a lot of "Screen time" and growth, and she won't be on earth the entire time either. I know this platform has a lot of simply MCs. He's straight forward with what he wants and even rejects people trying to throw themselves at him.

This is fixed, Chapter 70 is the last Chapter I had an editor working on before I stopped, I realized they weren't doing proper editing. If you find anything after Chapter 70 Let me know and I will get it fixed up, I will also compensate you for these issues if you ever want.

I will take a look at this chapter tonight, thanks for the heads up

It’s more him inspecting who Ty is and once he realized he isn’t the person he is looking for he changed his stance. But clearly he is still suspicious of Ty and company as you will see in a bit :) Let me know if you find anything else confusing though so I can try and working on making things more clear and easier to read. I took your advice and slowed down just a bit to stockpile and work on bringing previous chapter up a bit. So if you do find anything let me know and it’s greatly appreciated. Also feel free to join my server if you ever have advice or want a self insert character as I’m working on a tournament arc

General Mattison is warning Ty about a character who has much paler skin and has not harmed anyone despite having the capability.

The Demon King is trying to figure out how to manage or reduce the pain Ty is experiencing from the flames associated with his powers. No, Ty didn't ask him a question; the Demon King was offering information and a solution on his own.

Correct; my own spin on it that will evolve overtime

I fixed this, I hired an editor awhile ago and I didn’t realize how weird this was. I will look over the chapter and the last chapter a bit to ensure clarity

There are no accidents