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Fantastic read that adds much delight to the genre. The vivid descriptions and keen attention to detail are definitely going to have you immersed in this story to the point you lose track of time itself! Well done, keep it up author!!

Decent pacing with a concept not super common on the platform. Hopefully it idls done well and can be something great. I'm not sure what else to say.

Thanks Sien!

thanks for the review!

The story is interesting and characters are unique so that you can get invested in them. there are some typographical errors and grammar mistakes, but not enough to distract from the story. Keep it up author!

The book starts out with a pretty relatable activity and allows the author to paint a vivid picture of the scene and characters present. Its an immersive approach and right as you're getting pulled in you're suddenly thrust into the action, its an impressive approach! It allows the worldbuilding and the character development to flow seamlessly into the story!

Eve, I can't get over the emotions you manage to pack into the chapters. It's amazing. Thanks for all the hard work

This isn't my usual genre of choice, but I found myself captivated from the first chapter. Seriously, the author does a wonderful job pulling you into the world, yet keeps enough mystery to always want more. I'll be keeping an eye on this one! Keep it up!!

Amazing first chapter!

"as long as they can move" "we'll take people in a vegetative state" seems contradictory, or am I reading too much into it?

This review is occurring in the early stages, but I still find that this story has drawn my interest. The grammar seems to be on point and doesn't detract from the story at all. The personalities of the individuals we've met are starting to be developed, and it's exciting to see how they will shape up over time! The world building is starting to take form and isn't happening in the way of 'infodumps' which is great news for everyone! The first chapter leaves us wondering and questioning, which is great! I hope you give this book a try, it's definitely worth a read!

Lol Thanks Sien!

Terrific novel full of intrigue and wonder! I highly recommend you pick this up and don't put it down! The vivid details and lifelike characters will have you losing track of time and asking for more before you know it!!

Phenomenal start to what I except is going to be a wonderful addition to this site! The premise is intriguing and I can't wait for the new updates!!!

I'm definitely excited to see how this story progresses. It has an interesting premise and if the author can build on it properly it will definitely be a gem. As of right now the vivid details and worldbuilding are creating a picturesque landscape and I love that!

I love this book, it's a fun read! The grammar and pacing allow you to stay in the story and not be distracted by writing flaws while the worldbuilding does it's thing and drags you into it's depths, taking you hostage as you beg for another chapter to be released!

The worldbuilding and vivid detailing creates a unique environment that lets you get fully immersed into the story. The characters seem so lifelike that you can't help but feeling connected to them and caring about them. I highly recommend everyone gives this novel a try!

The vivid details and worldbuilding in this story are great! Combine that with the lifelike characters and intriguing dialogue and you end up with a novel that you get absorbed into, losing complete track of time. I only wish for more chapters, keep it up author! I'll be here!

Seriously, this is the start of something great. Don't let me down author! Im extremely excited to see where this goes. If you keep this up it'll definitely take off!